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I saw the one I want but half was missing I remember the sleeping bag in the back seat for when we were more than kissing The hopeful hammer and the threat of poison I couldn’t feel it at the time I was frozen ******* in a tent The zipper was broken Hand over my mouth so it couldn’t open A field full of muscle I couldn’t confide in driving souped up fortunes I was afraid to ride in Just give him what he wants next time and he won’t hurt you I couldn’t feel it at the time I didn’t have what I needed to complete my competing thoughts Two names I love in separate headlines I knew then I couldn’t leave without breaking something I knew what I wanted but she was missing and they were both gone I couldn’t feel it at the time I couldn’t hear a single thought A decades long drive-by memory frozen in time Now I can feel it all
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Mar 31, 2025
Mar 31, 2025 at 8:26 PM UTC
in the back seat
I saw the one I want but half was missing I remember the sleeping bag in the back seat for when we were more than kissing The hopeful hammer and the threat of poison I couldn’t feel it at the time I was frozen ******* in a tent The zipper was broken Hand over my mouth so it couldn’t open A field full of muscle I couldn’t confide in driving souped up fortunes I was afraid to ride in Just give him what he wants next time and he won’t hurt you I couldn’t feel it at the time I didn’t have what I needed to complete my competing thoughts Two names I love in separate headlines I knew then I couldn’t leave without breaking something I knew what I wanted but she was missing and they were both gone I couldn’t feel it at the time I couldn’t hear a single thought A decades long drive-by memory frozen in time Now I can feel it all
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Mar 31, 2025
Mar 31, 2025 at 8:26 PM UTC
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