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cinder rains from the sky, a past life immolated. my soul was ignited, by the fire in her eyes. the structure built is now aflame, crumbling to oblivion. and like all change, there is accompanying fear. are her feelings real? are mine? does she regret asking? why did she ask? how do i act? am i not caring enough? am i too caring? am i scaring her off? does she really want to spend time with me?  am i fit for such a blessing? can i ever meet her expectations? leave her satisfied? happy? i don't know i don't know __i don't know__ but what i do know, is that there is a sulfuric cloud looming, ready to engulf me, if i am to ever fall
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Apr 18, 2018
Apr 18, 2018 at 11:38 AM UTC
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cinder rains from the sky, a past life immolated. my soul was ignited, by the fire in her eyes. the structure built is now aflame, crumbling to oblivion. and like all change, there is accompanying fear. are her feelings real? are mine? does she regret asking? why did she ask? how do i act? am i not caring enough? am i too caring? am i scaring her off? does she really want to spend time with me?  am i fit for such a blessing? can i ever meet her expectations? leave her satisfied? happy? i don't know i don't know __i don't know__ but what i do know, is that there is a sulfuric cloud looming, ready to engulf me, if i am to ever fall
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17/M/Challenger Deep
Apr 18, 2018
Apr 18, 2018 at 11:38 AM UTC
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