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A date with an Atheist.

I kissed a boy, Who's neck was bare from faith. Empty all around. His lips tasted like sin , But his touch felt like nearby repenting. I wonder what his mother would have thought. I wonder if those knowledgeable creases placed on his neck mean more to me than it does to him. This was inspired off of the work of 'Atheist on a Date'. I wish I knew who to credit, but I don't. None of the less, all credit goes to whoever wrote this masterpiece. I hope you enjoy the reply. *Original Poem: “I kissed a girl Wearing a cross Around her neck Her lips didn’t taste Like church But her hips Felt like god I wonder what Her pastor would Have thought I wonder if that Cross around her neck Meant more to me Than it does To her”*
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Nov 19, 2012
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