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still be on my feat oh Joni you showed up at my door once more, Saturday morn, blonde bangs and ***** voice, two octaves below shrill, right about where the register intersection of heart piercing, me humming, memory smiling, poetry inspiring, yeah memories crying, that too together, we have had more than many, one case of you, a million sips, and I am writing to see how you're feeling and to let you know I never drank a case of you that left me, being still, left me standing on my feat my feat? drank de-feat like it was the sea, boundless but not soundless, sweet waves repeating, sea tears tinged with bittersweet cries of Tupelo honey, cause you were one of my angels, lifting me higher when love was saying not! this time kid, place, babe, not this peculiar particular apparition,   wrong rendition, and at last, finally, long time later, sheepishly, sweetly only, what was her name your voice stood me up, your words still slap my face with cases of kisses upon my neck, tune-turning prophetic notions of what's next still  be only just around the corner, waiting on a new, simple twist of feat, another song, poem, lover, and yet another, case of you, so we can always see both sides, and when I think of you Joni my mind seesaws, and I, still be on my feet, and thanks to you ready for my feat <•> 10:59am 10/28/17
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Oct 28, 2017
Oct 28, 2017 at 11:00 AM UTC
still be on my feat (for Joni)
still be on my feat oh Joni you showed up at my door once more, Saturday morn, blonde bangs and ***** voice, two octaves below shrill, right about where the register intersection of heart piercing, me humming, memory smiling, poetry inspiring, yeah memories crying, that too together, we have had more than many, one case of you, a million sips, and I am writing to see how you're feeling and to let you know I never drank a case of you that left me, being still, left me standing on my feat my feat? drank de-feat like it was the sea, boundless but not soundless, sweet waves repeating, sea tears tinged with bittersweet cries of Tupelo honey, cause you were one of my angels, lifting me higher when love was saying not! this time kid, place, babe, not this peculiar particular apparition,   wrong rendition, and at last, finally, long time later, sheepishly, sweetly only, what was her name your voice stood me up, your words still slap my face with cases of kisses upon my neck, tune-turning prophetic notions of what's next still  be only just around the corner, waiting on a new, simple twist of feat, another song, poem, lover, and yet another, case of you, so we can always see both sides, and when I think of you Joni my mind seesaws, and I, still be on my feet, and thanks to you ready for my feat <•> 10:59am 10/28/17
https://hellopoetry.com/poem/1692219/a-case-of-you-joni-first-datelast-date/ https://hellopoetry.com/poem/957041/write-like-joni/
nat-lipstadt
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Oct 28, 2017
Oct 28, 2017 at 11:00 AM UTC
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