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“In some office sits a poet, and he trembles as he sings, and he asks some guy, to circulate his soul around” Joni Mitchell <> joni: your both sides then and  now, was my guiding glasses for a life of motley loving and love, gained, pained, lost and found as a younger man, and now, as old soul with rear view perspective, the glasses tinted transition grey, (matching his pallor, his hair. his transient perspective, trembling fingers as he writes, with humility, 0 pleeze circulate these decoded words mate them out of clay hoping  come new daylight one or two, even a few will lend a rosy thistle, blow softly an encouraging breeze upon this poem the freedom to burn into glowing embers in our circulating worlds of pass/fail it’s my mere soul you pass judgement with a hint of tasteful scents on and beyond with an honorable push your mentioned breath, guiding them to the currents where poems go to blossom
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Nov 17, 2024
Nov 17, 2024 at 9:39 AM UTC
A Circulating Soul
The Joni (Mitchell) Collection https://hellopoetry.com/poem/1692219/a-case-of-you-joni-first-datelast-date/ https://hellopoetry.com/poem/957041/write-like-joni/ https://hellopoetry.com/poem/2185836/still-be-on-my-feat-for-joni/
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Aug 25, 2020
Aug 25, 2020 at 11:34 AM UTC
The Joni (Mitchell) Collection
still be on my feat oh Joni you showed up at my door once more, Saturday morn, blonde bangs and ***** voice, two octaves below shrill, right about where the register intersection of heart piercing, me humming, memory smiling, poetry inspiring, yeah memories crying, that too together, we have had more than many, one case of you, a million sips, and I am writing to see how you're feeling and to let you know I never drank a case of you that left me, being still, left me standing on my feat my feat? drank de-feat like it was the sea, boundless but not soundless, sweet waves repeating, sea tears tinged with bittersweet cries of Tupelo honey, cause you were one of my angels, lifting me higher when love was saying not! this time kid, place, babe, not this peculiar particular apparition,   wrong rendition, and at last, finally, long time later, sheepishly, sweetly only, what was her name your voice stood me up, your words still slap my face with cases of kisses upon my neck, tune-turning prophetic notions of what's next still  be only just around the corner, waiting on a new, simple twist of feat, another song, poem, lover, and yet another, case of you, so we can always see both sides, and when I think of you Joni my mind seesaws, and I, still be on my feet, and thanks to you ready for my feat <•> 10:59am 10/28/17
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Oct 28, 2017
Oct 28, 2017 at 11:00 AM UTC
still be on my feat (for Joni)
all my life wanted to write just the way Joni (Mitchell) sings seesawing rising unexpected, write the changing temperament in the pitch, of now yawing, oscillating, speedy slow, enunciating the whip of love crazy twist to fall into a double-time bass baritone insane from and into a higher pitch, switch on the en garde, blue ink onto cloth napkin poetry plain plaintive, rendering the scene, rendering my heart, it's crazy high-lows, emotion backyard swing set *Oh Joni! I could drink a case of you* that is was what I told the single girls when I was a wooing man send me home, high and crying, thinking uneven, creatively, drinking you, pounding the dashboard, sing our palpitating poems thinking up the in-between songs of till next time that they loved so much they begged, sing it again and again I drank them all and think now of poem love songs, vintages that never caged, never aging, those songs I wrote for them, back in the day when Joni taught me how to see life in verse
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Nov 22, 2014
Nov 22, 2014 at 6:17 AM UTC
write like Joni
“leave ‘em laughing when you go”^ it appears that Ogden Poet and Joni Songster have ganged up on poor Pitch Black to remind that he who laughs best, is he who laugh hardest at himself, and their vanity fair the bathroom mirror chips in with a chiding chortle, spasming him so hard, mirror cracks! right about where the smiling mouth and laughing rolling tears intersect, under the nose, landing in an open braying mouth “Laughter is the corrective force which prevents us from becoming cranks” just a most excellent reminder that gods come and go, taste in deities is just another fashion item*
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Jul 7, 2020
Jul 7, 2020 at 8:19 AM UTC
leave ‘em laughing when you go” (especially yourself)
somewhere between the first date and the last date Joni Mitchell, she, me   encapsulates I'm remembering well, pounding the dashboard of a red Jag, laughable now, mocking this fool's need for a middle age conceit, his heart to restart, reactivate in enthusiastic lockstep with the voice of the Joni,  the blonde goddess of his youth, foot falling in love, with the accelerator, speeding along at a joyous sixty five, in places where the signs said, "thirty five to stay alive" this aged Rip Van Winkle teenager, in reverse osmosis of Big, an old buck, come back to antlered life, singing along to the CD disc set on backdate *I could drink case of you, and still be on my feet* and he could rediscovering the champagne taste of a great first date, feeling the heated blood and fevered mind, symptoms of the pleasures of a robust anticipate thinking she's the one who will make him great, happy greater, greater happy than that one ever, ever, he thought was roulette~wheel possible, landing on the red of hopeful for a floodgate overture spilling months, days, minute minute moments (tiny time intervals), of the fated faded last date later,  the next eve, next day or the next of never, comes the deflate but then, Joni singing comfort words, reminding him that he would be, wisely, sadly seeing, feeling, both sides now, and yet again, getting his mind back to straight *I've looked at love that way, but now it's just another show. you leave 'em laughing when you go, and if you care, don't let them know, don't give yourself away* a grown man punk'd, blasted, dumb and dumber, dumped, a feeling sorry sad sack self, until he himself reflates, drink another case, onto yet another magical mystery first date pounding that dashboard once again, believing it's not too late that perfect roommate heart's to find and captivate, to attain, invade, acquaint and laughingly... serenade
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Jul 5, 2016
Jul 5, 2016 at 8:38 PM UTC
A Case of You & Joni (first date/last date)
somewhere between the first date and the last date Joni Mitchell, she, me   encapsulates I'm remembering well, pounding the dashboard of a red Jag, laughable now, mocking this fool's need for a middle age conceit, his heart to restart, reactivate in enthusiastic lockstep with the voice of the Joni,  the blonde goddess of his youth, foot falling in love, with the accelerator, speeding along at a joyous sixty five, in places where the signs said, "thirty five to stay alive" this aged Rip Van Winkle teenager, in reverse osmosis of Big, an old buck, come back to antlered life, singing along to the CD disc set on backdate *I could drink case of you, and still be on my feet* and he could rediscovering the champagne taste of a great first date, feeling the heated blood and fevered mind, symptoms of the pleasures of a robust anticipate thinking she's the one who will make him great, happy greater, greater happy than that one ever, ever, he thought was roulette~wheel possible, landing on the red of hopeful for a floodgate overture spilling months, days, minute minute moments (tiny time intervals), of the fated faded last date later,  the next eve, next day or the next of never, comes the deflate but then, Joni singing comfort words, reminding him that he would be, wisely, sadly seeing, feeling, both sides now, and yet again, getting his mind back to straight *I've looked at love that way, but now it's just another show. you leave 'em laughing when you go, and if you care, don't let them know, don't give yourself away* a grown man punk'd, blasted, dumb and dumber, dumped, a feeling sorry sad sack self, until he himself reflates, drink another case, onto yet another magical mystery first date pounding that dashboard once again, believing it's not too late that perfect roommate heart's to find and captivate, to attain, invade, acquaint and laughingly... serenade
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I found you in the summer, Your button nose charm enticed me To learn to love you, and know you, Thin as a twig, you entered my life, But you were filled with so much. Such a gentle soul. Such enormous energy. Long and flowing brown hair, shining in the sun, With eyes to match it. You just have a way of making me feel grateful.
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Mar 19, 2017
Mar 19, 2017 at 12:25 AM UTC
For a Girl