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An Evening By The Sea

by lily-thanh

we walked toward the beginning of the sea, hand in hand, you told me this was where you always took her to, and she always fell in love with the sunset. I dipped my toes into the cold water. It tingled like salt on the tip of my tongue. I pressed my feet down and the sea monster took a firm grip around my ankle. My laughter filled the air, and your sugary scent from behind me floated down my throat. Your lips frantically searched for mine, my arm pulled down your head, and we kissed, and we kissed. I kept calling your name, and you mine, and we lost balance and fell down on the tide. For a moment, I thought the ocean could have taken us away on a free ride. Wouldn't that be good? But you were laughing, lifting me up, walking me back to the sand with your endless kisses, and your arms around my waist. We lay down together, smiled constantly, whispered silly things, then again we locked lips as the waves sang louder, chasing seagulls away, so they would not bother us. Under the light wind and the sun we made love right by the sea, and under the sky so blue. You sank deeper into me before rising back, and I rose higher above you before sinking in, in perfect harmony, like those waves luring in the sea. And I asked us to leave right before sunset though I always wanted to see it. You were smiling as we drove away, I was looking out the window, and suddenly tasting salty water falling down on my lips.
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Vietnamese
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Written by
lily-thanh
Vietnamese
Published
Aug 20, 2010
Time
3m
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In return of a rainy evening to the music of Nat.

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