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SATURDAY MORNING 1961.

by terry-collett

Jane climbed off the Saturday bus to town her black hair ruffled by the wind her eyes looking over at you her mother close by you standing by the wall having climbed from the bus a few moments before your mother stood and spoke to others you watched as Jane buttoned up her coat against the winter cold her fingers turning blue then she moved over to you and said I saw you by the water tower last night as we drove by my father visiting a parishioner in the village I was watching the sun moving beyond the Downs you said like some giant moving away to sleep she smiled and surreptitiously she touched your hand her mother’s head looking the other way talking to your mother of her husband’s work of church or of weather or whatever you gazed at Jane’s eyes the turn of head the smile on lips the way her hands touched oh to be with her away from others to talk and walk and capture each moment with her closeness but then her mother moved away to shop and Jane followed just behind and as she walked away you painted her figure and beauty in your mind.
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Mar 19, 2012
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