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This morning I was filled with an inconsolable hurt And I noticed everything on my way to work… The man in the grey coat reading his kindle The blonde lady telling her friend about how she was newly single I saw the small schoolboy leap on the train I could tell he didn’t want to be late for school again I became aware of the fed up look on the train drivers faces They looked as though they were exhausted of coming to these places I observed a handsome young man give the old lady a seat Everyone smiled and thought, isn’t he sweet. I grimaced when the barrier decided to trap the man in the suit He cried and complained that he should have taken a different route. I noticed everyone but nobody noticed me… Because the pain I felt made me as still as can be…
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Aug 11, 2016
Aug 11, 2016 at 1:36 PM UTC
On My Way
This morning I was filled with an inconsolable hurt And I noticed everything on my way to work… The man in the grey coat reading his kindle The blonde lady telling her friend about how she was newly single I saw the small schoolboy leap on the train I could tell he didn’t want to be late for school again I became aware of the fed up look on the train drivers faces They looked as though they were exhausted of coming to these places I observed a handsome young man give the old lady a seat Everyone smiled and thought, isn’t he sweet. I grimaced when the barrier decided to trap the man in the suit He cried and complained that he should have taken a different route. I noticed everyone but nobody noticed me… Because the pain I felt made me as still as can be…
stephanie-grace
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Aug 11, 2016
Aug 11, 2016 at 1:36 PM UTC
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