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the trail lined by wild daisies wanders past your old house and where we used to pick blackberries where i'd let the thorns scratch me up and we'd laugh the tea-stained map rolled up in my old messenger bag marks our spots where we'd hide the dowsing rods and secret messages; the road full of switchbacks and the hill steep and the path a circle; a leviathan with its tail in its teeth; and you holding my hand and dragging me further into the thorned bushes- do you remember that?
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Mar 22
Mar 22, 2026 at 8:27 PM UTC
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the trail lined by wild daisies wanders past your old house and where we used to pick blackberries where i'd let the thorns scratch me up and we'd laugh the tea-stained map rolled up in my old messenger bag marks our spots where we'd hide the dowsing rods and secret messages; the road full of switchbacks and the hill steep and the path a circle; a leviathan with its tail in its teeth; and you holding my hand and dragging me further into the thorned bushes- do you remember that?
**** i was whimsical
renne
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Mar 22
Mar 22, 2026 at 8:27 PM UTC
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