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Maybe, I'll get It Right

She carried his cards and letters,

bundled with a rubber band,

in her yellow raincoat.

 

He stood on the motel roof,

watching the freeway paint the night,

headlights begging the question,

Will I ever get it right?

 

She mumbles from below.

Depends if you take the right exit

and feed that mutt that you've been ignoring.

 

She chuckled, fragile as exotic china.

He wanted to catch that laugh,

eat it,

and let it nourish him.

 

He traced the lines of his face

in a rain puddle,

dreaming of mountains that needed climbed,

thinking maybe

he could fix one ******* thing

before the sun went down.

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Written by
thomas-w-case
59 / M / Clear Lake
Published
Dec 26, 2025
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20·105
Notes

Thank you for stopping by. I just posted a new long video reading from Aluminum Cowboys along with a few gritty vignettes I wrote recently.

Watch the video here:

https://youtu.be/QzS2hIl5HOU

Check out my book Aluminum Cowboys: Poems and Short Stories, and my other recently published books on Amazon.

Thanks for watching, reading, and supporting my work!

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