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I don't count, for I don't know what counts A look, a smile, silence, to turn and walk away What counts is for them for which it matters Known only at the end when the whole revealed And I, a new self, rebuilt from all that counted Of others: their words, presence, absence, or kiss And we become Others, as Others become Us The perfection of unity, now, a shadow glimpsed
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Oct 2, 2024
Oct 2, 2024 at 10:20 PM UTC
Self and Others
I don't count, for I don't know what counts A look, a smile, silence, to turn and walk away What counts is for them for which it matters Known only at the end when the whole revealed And I, a new self, rebuilt from all that counted Of others: their words, presence, absence, or kiss And we become Others, as Others become Us The perfection of unity, now, a shadow glimpsed
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Oct 2, 2024
Oct 2, 2024 at 10:20 PM UTC
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