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Mercury

by @iamfreenowitseems

Oh warm planet, can you tell me? What it feels like to be burning all the time What it feels like to be closer to the big light in the sky than we will ever be What it feels like Oh small planet, do you like it? The light must be so bright where you are The heat so scorching The days so short Oh mercury, do you know why you were named? After the god of messengers And of thieves What did you steal to earn that name, small planet? What could you have possibly taken from us?
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16 / F / Victoria, Australia
Published
Dec 10, 2019
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#space#mercury#planet#freeverse
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