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Once again I am captured Struck by the rose, enraptured by the thorn. I see your reflection in ivory paper, and the crown of your sweet head like a blanket of fallen snow. Does it matter, I wonder, if you were truly alive or truly living? For in these pages I can see your image as truly as if it were a branding in my head. The gentle slope of your shoulders, the dark and twisted curls- Now see, you begin to see her too- the small & delicate hands, with crooked ring fingers, the intuitive eyes. And perhaps if I call Aphrodite, down from the sea foam and have her fair lips kiss these words, I can have you materialize in my breath and echo into my arms, a statue no more. Or perhaps I will lie a fool my thumbs and forefingers obscured by ink and your skin that of clay detached and resolute.
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Dec 27, 2020
Dec 27, 2020 at 2:09 PM UTC
Galatea: She Who is Ivory
Once again I am captured Struck by the rose, enraptured by the thorn. I see your reflection in ivory paper, and the crown of your sweet head like a blanket of fallen snow. Does it matter, I wonder, if you were truly alive or truly living? For in these pages I can see your image as truly as if it were a branding in my head. The gentle slope of your shoulders, the dark and twisted curls- Now see, you begin to see her too- the small & delicate hands, with crooked ring fingers, the intuitive eyes. And perhaps if I call Aphrodite, down from the sea foam and have her fair lips kiss these words, I can have you materialize in my breath and echo into my arms, a statue no more. Or perhaps I will lie a fool my thumbs and forefingers obscured by ink and your skin that of clay detached and resolute.
Inspired by the tale of Galatea and Pygmalion, in which Pygmalion falls in love with the statue he's created; or the artist with his creation. I spun the tale so that it's the writer falling in love with the inevitably written
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19/Cisgender Female/Canada
Dec 27, 2020
Dec 27, 2020 at 2:09 PM UTC
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