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To dearest, I hope you can view me more clearly after this poem: 2 pm 7/14/1788 I am lying down wondering why you are not replying I wrote you a letter worth crying 3 pm 7/15/1788 I heard your voice In nothing but noise 4 pm 7/16/1788 I remembered what you said-- 5 pm 7/17/1788 I prayed for us to be wed 6 pm 7/18/1788 I got tired of waiting 7 pm 7/19/1788 I heard-- I cried 8 pm 7/20/1788 You died.
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Jun 6, 2014
Jun 6, 2014 at 4:26 PM UTC
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To dearest, I hope you can view me more clearly after this poem: 2 pm 7/14/1788 I am lying down wondering why you are not replying I wrote you a letter worth crying 3 pm 7/15/1788 I heard your voice In nothing but noise 4 pm 7/16/1788 I remembered what you said-- 5 pm 7/17/1788 I prayed for us to be wed 6 pm 7/18/1788 I got tired of waiting 7 pm 7/19/1788 I heard-- I cried 8 pm 7/20/1788 You died.
The loss of a loved one in old times. News travelled slowly, but never did love.
#love#sad#sadness#tears#hope#cried#miss#tragedy#wed
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Jun 6, 2014
Jun 6, 2014 at 4:26 PM UTC
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