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Tracing lightly,    as if drawing on sand    leaving only a slight indentation Pushing harder    leaving a line behind Hearing the words    "I hate you"     over and over     trying to scratch out the pain Pressing harder,     feeling the pain of those words     gently acknowledging Looking down,     seeing the angry line Why doesn't it help?
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