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Dismayed

Though it may be cruel I somehow am fooled Her departure in heartache I never understood Though I suppressed What I try to hold inside your hand brought forth A part of me that had died Should’ve been guarded For I knew what was to be To my own folly I relinquish Fully venerable to thee I felt too much in her summer gaze as her undertow sucked me in blinded in the waters entraped in her waves Though I long to be free To escape from the mind I travel onward haunted Like the days I left behind Though I am made a fool I cannot help but to think The coldness that follows Eternally to be truly hollow To heaven I question Why must I face dismay? To God above I wish to Take this life away I do not want to walk alone For there is no joy in such Forever I am reminded Of the pain to be ensued
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Written by
Cman121
22 / M / The Dirty South
Published
Jun 26, 2018
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Notes

The last two lines do not rhyme on purpose to symbolize an uncomfortable and cold end.

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