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i just think that it lacks subtlety to type out words so loose and free from rhyme, they are but conscious streams deserve not, the name, poetry and, in my opinion, it is a sin to explain a poem, it's adolescence to spoil the hidden secret within for the art of lyric is not a whim my poems are so much better than yours for they sound like the songs of yore and if they do contain a lore it needs no explanation, of course! now, take this with a grain of salt for those who tend to be appalled by the insensitive, one with the gall to criticize and not applaud or appreciate the messages written by one's fellow poets this act, which mutiny, approaches unfeeling soul, the heart, atrocious! i'm actually just kidding around with ideas of an unknowing crowd whose opinions are just so... profound for some reason, it makes them proud and who might I be speaking to? what sane person is such a fool? a younger me, lacking reprove had the daring to be so rude i can feel your scorching gaze on my skin searching, probing and then easing when you find that my author was not that stupid to create a debacle for poems are sheets designed to capture meaning ad infinitum happiness saddness permeate culture etched into paper taking no form fluid changing free
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May 1, 2018
May 1, 2018 at 12:18 AM UTC
the lyric critic
i just think that it lacks subtlety to type out words so loose and free from rhyme, they are but conscious streams deserve not, the name, poetry and, in my opinion, it is a sin to explain a poem, it's adolescence to spoil the hidden secret within for the art of lyric is not a whim my poems are so much better than yours for they sound like the songs of yore and if they do contain a lore it needs no explanation, of course! now, take this with a grain of salt for those who tend to be appalled by the insensitive, one with the gall to criticize and not applaud or appreciate the messages written by one's fellow poets this act, which mutiny, approaches unfeeling soul, the heart, atrocious! i'm actually just kidding around with ideas of an unknowing crowd whose opinions are just so... profound for some reason, it makes them proud and who might I be speaking to? what sane person is such a fool? a younger me, lacking reprove had the daring to be so rude i can feel your scorching gaze on my skin searching, probing and then easing when you find that my author was not that stupid to create a debacle for poems are sheets designed to capture meaning ad infinitum happiness saddness permeate culture etched into paper taking no form fluid changing free
a version of the introductory course of any and all programming languages "hello, poetry"
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23/M/Atlanta
May 1, 2018
May 1, 2018 at 12:18 AM UTC
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