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#4thwall
The end is not the answer: Spit in the wind. Do you think to overtake A hurricane With a martyr drop Of rain? Answer me. The end is not the answer: When you say that Deafeningly, I'll Enjoy the quiet Softness of Thunder. Answer me. The end is not the answer: Drink tea and await A knock on your door At 1'n the afternoon: [knock knock] Will you come with me? The end is not the answer: But when that rejection Breaks my heart, and it Casts the future to shadow - My question's false premise Was that it was open-ended. The end is not the answer? What part of the poem is this? Answer me.
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Sep 22, 2025
Sep 22, 2025 at 7:23 PM UTC
Answer me
(As if sitting in a wooden box) I confess. I confess to feeling the pain of needs unmet and overlooking it, to hearing the opening of things, the closing of them too the confidence of a heart unbroken say "I'd like to try!" and a cold bitter laugh in a triumph of parsimony. I confess to doing less and allowing it in my own vulnerability. (As if tearing a casing spun of silk) I am a catalogist, rebuilding a place In my defence I have known you less, but even now - there are no reference books to your emotions or reactions no rule of thumb except to ease anger, aid logic, clear runways. (As if the knowing was as easy as the learning) together we are four decades of stubbornness and pain and kindness we are warmed feet on the black range cooker we are the climbing wall at the fair You are three dots, ellipsis, open-ended. and i am writing bad poetry about a girl who can fly...
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Mar 29, 2020
Mar 29, 2020 at 7:31 AM UTC
As if sitting in a wooden box
A large fearsome oaf walks about swampy body stimulates my **** folds of fat that look like a swamp Its gleaming and severe eyes should have scared me, but I choose to leave it be. Since now, I am in control. Self-aware. Omniscent. There is space for only one monster You are written by the creator, he has died Papercuts, everywhere I’m the Creator now I have all power I make myself queen I write, and it warps your reality So, I command that, you, The monster will die Your eyes yanked from their sockets And chopped and served On a pretty pink plate Your brain will be poached in My Brain Boiler Your fingers will cook in my Finger Fryer Your heart, put on display, Heart Hanger Your blood will be included in my Rémoulade A rather runny Rémoulade So, I guess, I’m the monster
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Sep 21, 2018
Sep 21, 2018 at 4:13 PM UTC
The Monster
i just think that it lacks subtlety to type out words so loose and free from rhyme, they are but conscious streams deserve not, the name, poetry and, in my opinion, it is a sin to explain a poem, it's adolescence to spoil the hidden secret within for the art of lyric is not a whim my poems are so much better than yours for they sound like the songs of yore and if they do contain a lore it needs no explanation, of course! now, take this with a grain of salt for those who tend to be appalled by the insensitive, one with the gall to criticize and not applaud or appreciate the messages written by one's fellow poets this act, which mutiny, approaches unfeeling soul, the heart, atrocious! i'm actually just kidding around with ideas of an unknowing crowd whose opinions are just so... profound for some reason, it makes them proud and who might I be speaking to? what sane person is such a fool? a younger me, lacking reprove had the daring to be so rude i can feel your scorching gaze on my skin searching, probing and then easing when you find that my author was not that stupid to create a debacle for poems are sheets designed to capture meaning ad infinitum happiness saddness permeate culture etched into paper taking no form fluid changing free
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May 1, 2018
May 1, 2018 at 12:18 AM UTC
the lyric critic
It does help, To put thoughts to paper; To lay them out FLAT. To see the words and meaning, To feel the rhyme and reason, To string them out like pearls- To count the beads, To put between tooth and nail, To examine every line and curve. (These words) An empty chattering echo in head, A hollow, indecipherable boom, A cacophony of giggling and chittering Whirlwind of birds . (these words). Outside the head, these thoughts And words are tamed in chains, Captured on these lines- Taking space on a page. For who to read? For You, my sweet- All these words are for You.
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May 28, 2014
May 28, 2014 at 7:30 PM UTC
Journal Writing