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Seems Like a Ride

This is very surreal, it must be a dream Falling and falling through thick hot steam Hitting some sort of surface, I stop to catch my breath Wiping the sweat off my face, wondering where I am and why I feel like death Before another thought could arise, the surface collapsed This time falling slowly, hearing distant sounds of human gasps Trying to stay calm as I am floating in this unknown reality Its almost like i might have control; its my own malady I'm starting to think I am supposed to be here To learn, to be, not to be scared nor to fear Sounds coming from every direction; very faint echoes I close my eyes briefly and upon opening them I realize I'm atop giant legos Wanting to play, I attempt to touch the huge green one The moment I made contact, an alarm sounded, so what do I do? I run I ran along the giant legos for what seemed like hours Legos now out of sight, and far in the distance, some odd shaped towers I wanted to reach them but only empty space fed the way A sudden fatigue came over me so I found a place to lay As I awoke, I noticed a pathway from the towers to where I stood How very strange, I thought, but also this is good I make my way to these mysterious towers, finding myself in awe The weirdest and yet beautiful buildings I had ever seen, and insanely tall I let myself in to the nearest tower, having no clue what I may find I open the large door, and to my surprise, the room was mine! I am in my own bedroom, and I see myself sleeping in my bed I walk closer to myself, and gave me a big thump on the head Next thing I know I am awake, and it was, indeed, a dream Baffled and confused but learned that nothing is ever what it seems
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Aug 31, 2010
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