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Between light and judgment

I closed my eyes once and dreamt,

I dreamt of the end of the beginning,

Of a breaking tide untouched by pain,

Of streets of gold. Heaven.

 

I wandered through that world of gold,

Until I came upon a narrow bridge.

A few small steps—and there I stood,

Suspended in its silent middle.

Before me, figures moved toward me. Falling.

 

I lingered there, confused, unknowing,

Why they fell, while I walked untouched.

More souls slipped past me, endlessly—

All but a single, quiet girl.

She came to me, smiled, and took my hand.

 

“Come,” she said, “you do not need to see.”

Yet still I looked: left, right, beneath.

And there they were:

Faceless voices, crying out in pain.

 

She saw the doubt within my eyes and spoke:

“Judgment has come. These souls were lost.”

But something in me would not yield,

Because there had been evil in me.

 

So I walked on, still holding to the light,

Believing in a goodness far beyond my sight,

Yet softly, deep within my heart, I prayed

That mercy reached further than I could understand.

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17 / F
Published
Mar 24
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