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Icarus and his star

the icarus you know

the icarus you knew

the icarus who has fallen

the one who is an icarus anew

has loved a star that is brighter than usual

but a star that shines just like every other star

nothing new

 

but a star can blind you when it gets too close

when YOU get too close

but icarus didnt mind

because you wouldnt know how blind you are

until the light's suddenly off

 

The star had fallen

Much like icarus himself

But he has fallen gracefully and at will

Unlike icarus who was ripped of his wings and had fallen ill

But together they stayed

And together they grew

Icarus and his star had started anew

 

But what icarus didn't know

Or rather, what he decided to ignore

Was that the sun was a star

And a star has to prioritize light over love

 

It happened once when his sun chose to shine, still

Even though it knew that it would melt off icarus's wings

And it happened again with his star

As his star starts to lose his light

 

"I have to go home and see to it that my light doesn't go off"

The star said as he prepares himself

"You're leaving me" icarus said

Blinded by his needs and his selfishness

"It's not like that my love. I would never want to lose you but I cannot lose myself for you" the star had said through his tears

He saw icarus was not hearing him

Was not understnding him

So he did what he swore not to do

He broke his own heart and left only with half of a whole

 

That was the last that icarus heard of his star

Now he wears his heart in his sleeves and his stars heart around his neck

And now the icarus you know

the icarus you knew

the icarus who has fallen

the one who is an icarus anew

has loved a star that is brighter than usual

And loves him still, but on a brighter point of view

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Written by
icarus-frayed
20 / M
Published
Aug 14, 2018
Lines·Words
44·342
Notes

IVE HAD THIS IN MY DRAFTS FOR TOO LONG AND MY FRIEND FINALLY KNCOKED SOME GOOD SENSE IN ME AND HERE IT IS

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#lostlove#love#icarus#thesun#hisstar#hurt#growth#acceptance
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