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Judgment.

Judgment. (RD/Rough Draft)

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No judgment.

 

body malfunction.

Pain and fear

At every junction

 

Grasping the cliff

Forgot caution–

Letting tears bend

Faking your hand

As if it lend

 

Gave punishment

Not redemption

Fed tears

As if to mend

 

Embodied my pain

Pretending to tend

To the broken and ******

 

Forgetting the mind

Let behind

Left to decline

 

With only

My own

fractured judgment

To die.

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Written by
OliviaWilliams
16 / F / Wisconsin
Published
Apr 1
Lines·Words
25·66
Notes

This is a base for the poem!

THIS IS NOT (NOT) the final poem!

Advice still appreciated though!

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