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"1894"

by richard-riddle

(My first posting on HP. Nor will I ever forget the comments from Sally and Pradip.  Occasionally, I like to repost it for the newcomers to the site.) I wish to share a story of when I nearly met my fate- A tale of an adventure, and a quest I had to make A story of an abandoned mine- A search for silver and gold- Of prospectors, and the miners- And the secrets they must hold My father used to search for gold in the mountains and their streams- And found enough of the elusive stuff to make my mother's wedding rings. I thought that I would try my hand- to see what I could find- So I set out to seek the entrance to an old, abandoned mine I left for Arizona, to Prescott, I wished to go - Crossed the Rio Grande, on thru New Mexico. Finally got to Phoenix - 800 miles and count'n, then north, up to Prescott, Thumb Butte, and Granite Mountain. I pitched my tent on Granite Creek, with great anticipation- Checked the notes from my father's quotes, and began the exploration With my father's tin pan packed in a bag- and his pic-ax at my side- I felt like a real "old timer", with heaven as my guide. I found the one I was looking for- with a darkened cave as the entrance door- And a handmade sign on a rotting board, said "Welcome Friend, 1894." Well, I picked and I chipped! and I chipped and I picked! til the sores on my hands ran red- When I felt some dirt drifting down on my shirt- when some pebbles hit my head. It only took a second- for the ground to start to quake- The dirt was falling faster, and the walls began to shake. I ran as fast as I knew how, toward that entrance door- When the last crosstimber broke in half, and came crashing to the floor! Now, I don't know how much time had passed- since all of that began- But felt as if I had been in a trance- when someone took my hand. I grabbed my shirt-tail, wiped my eyes- tilt my head to see- And saw a sun-dried, weathered face, looking down on me! He wore a wrinkled old hat, an old flannel shirt- Raggedy old pants, and a mile's worth of dirt- He had a beard of silver threads, with a tinge of ginger root- His hands were thick and calloused, and their color matched his boots. He gave me a jug of water that came from the nearby creek As I tilt the jug to take a drink- he began to speak. "*Strange thing about abandoned mines- they wish to be left alone, To keep the souls of all of those- who often called them home."* His voice began to tremble- as he spoke those woeful words, He seemed to be recalling many things he'd seen and heard. "*It isn't greed that brought you here, I can see that, in your eyes, it's not just ore you're looking for- But another kind of prize.*" "*You must go back to your domain, and you'll find that treasure chest- For it lies deep within your heart- and in those folks you favor best.*" I shut my eyes, said a prayer- and asked if what I did was wrong? When I finished, and said "amen", that old man was gone. I never asked him for his name- or the place from whence he came- Some things are better left in silence and not to be explained. I went back to take another look and gather up my gear- Tried to find that “Welcome” sign, but, it too, had disappeared. *I stood in "awe and wonder," of the place that I had found- And with my eyes, I realized, I had trod on hallowed ground*. Going home I pondered o'er the words that old man said- But did all that really happen, or was it the "bumps" upon my head? I got back home and cracked a smile- as I strode up to the door- And there, hung a handmade sign on a rotting board, said- "Welcome Home, 1894” copyright: r.riddle August 2011 copyright: revised July 28, 2013 I know, for a fact, that the third stanza is true. Everything else was created from "yarns" coming, not just from my father, but uncles as well. And I also threw in my two cents.
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Dec 4, 2016
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