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Fireworks

by @kate-e-deter

I want to write something deep and poetic About the fireworks I saw. But all I can come up with Is the physical attributes— The seeing that I did, The hearing that I did, The feeling that I did, The experiencing that I did. Red comets shot upward In a slight arcing path To explode in brilliant light And rain down upon the spectators. There’s a hush of anticipation in the audience Between the moment they notice The curling smoke trail, The breathtaking visual display, And the slightly delayed KERPOW As the firework’s sound Finally makes its way through the air. Each exploding fragment Fizzles through the air with a quiet hissing, Competing with the screeching Of the next firework going up. It’s almost kind of sad: Each firework aims for the sky, Reaches as high as it can go, Leaving behind bits of itself as it does so, But hits some invisible ceiling— Some fireworks’ ceilings Are higher than others— And that is their maximum. They can take no more, They cannot reach the sky, They cannot reach the stars, They cannot reach their brethren, And so they explode in their sadness or anger; But in doing so, They light the way for others.
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Written by
kate-e-deter
American
Published
Jul 18, 2014
Time
2m
Tags
#metaphor#light#deep#fireworks#explosions
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