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We sat on that old pier, as the others crab-fished by. I found my hands beneath me, in an attempt to keep them dry. I traced the outline of a mountain range with my tired, tearful eyes, and the sun pinned me to the concrete wall, stripping me of any disguise. The fresh wounds on my shoulder still oozed their precious blood, yet we talked of days still to come and summers, oh so far ahead. Yet for a moment I almost believed that what I’d done had been undone but you struck me with reality and my walls came tumbling down. We looked at each other, in the wild, unsettling sun, with the sea-surf sparkling blue and voices of our distant friends ringing of the new and interesting discovery that one crab, no, two, had broken through the green net - maybe that was you.
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Jan 4, 2015
Jan 4, 2015 at 4:15 PM UTC
15.11.14
We sat on that old pier, as the others crab-fished by. I found my hands beneath me, in an attempt to keep them dry. I traced the outline of a mountain range with my tired, tearful eyes, and the sun pinned me to the concrete wall, stripping me of any disguise. The fresh wounds on my shoulder still oozed their precious blood, yet we talked of days still to come and summers, oh so far ahead. Yet for a moment I almost believed that what I’d done had been undone but you struck me with reality and my walls came tumbling down. We looked at each other, in the wild, unsettling sun, with the sea-surf sparkling blue and voices of our distant friends ringing of the new and interesting discovery that one crab, no, two, had broken through the green net - maybe that was you.
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Jan 4, 2015
Jan 4, 2015 at 4:15 PM UTC
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