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I drunk the acid, It burns and burns, It smelled so sweet, Just like the very mention of your name. I drunk the acid, It tasted so bitter, It fooled me, My insides burn, Yet i take another swig, Just like that very first cig, I drunk the acid, Why is it cruel? Why does it burn? Why does if fool? Why did you leave? I drink the acid, It makes my insides shrivel and hide, It burns and burns, I want it to leave. Why did you burn? Why did you lie? Why did you even bother to stay by my side? I drink the acid, I melt and rot, My skin falls off. I drink the acid, "Go away!" i say. I drink the acid, Only scattered bones and melted skin remain.
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Mar 8
Mar 8, 2026 at 2:51 PM UTC
Acid
I drunk the acid, It burns and burns, It smelled so sweet, Just like the very mention of your name. I drunk the acid, It tasted so bitter, It fooled me, My insides burn, Yet i take another swig, Just like that very first cig, I drunk the acid, Why is it cruel? Why does it burn? Why does if fool? Why did you leave? I drink the acid, It makes my insides shrivel and hide, It burns and burns, I want it to leave. Why did you burn? Why did you lie? Why did you even bother to stay by my side? I drink the acid, I melt and rot, My skin falls off. I drink the acid, "Go away!" i say. I drink the acid, Only scattered bones and melted skin remain.
poem that i wrote after getting blocked by my best friend after they started being really distant with me, and its kinda about that and how that friend kept making me feel like i was terrible to be around so yeah
Mixael
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Mar 8
Mar 8, 2026 at 2:51 PM UTC
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