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Archaic world

by Roshan

World altered a lot But forgot to vendor a pot, Manifestation of satisfaction seemed But oblivious to what they dreamed, At a crossroads they looked dead But never excluded their bed, Cows stayed in shed But never deviated from the normal fed, The fed made a well adorned bed, Lastly the culprits frightened And repeated same to falsely brighten.
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Roshan
14 / M / India
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Written by
Roshan
14 / M / India
Published
Mar 25
Time
1m
Notes

Theme: The poem stresses upon the fateful errors humans made for which they have been compensating for years. Reference of animals highlights how other creatures live in simplicity while the experimenting humans gradually make earth near to its death. Moreover, it represents the experimentable environment other organisms maintain for the humans to decay it.

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#deep#shakespeare#williamwordsworth#robertfrost#fascinating#philosophical#india#delhi#consciousness#thoughtprovoking
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