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the imperfect perfect note

if this reads like goodbye

it’s because i wrote it

from the edge of a night

that almost convinced me i was finished

i tried to make it clean

timed, final, beautiful in the most tragic way

but pain has terrible handwriting

and grief never knows when to end a sentence

so every line kept breaking

into another thought

another memory

another reason i was still here

long enough to keep writing

maybe that’s the cruel miracle of it

the timing was always untimely

the ending always arrived too soon

or maybe never at all

so if you’re holding this poem

know it was almost a note

until the page reminded me

unfinished is still alive

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Written by
thesilentwriter01
20 / M / South Africa
Published
Apr 5
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21·116
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This poem is a scrap from a suicide note I wrote 2 years ago and turned it into a poem

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#suicide#death#abandon#lost#depression#solitude#hopless
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