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The Walker

by priscilla-e-looney

In the long ago past ancient timeline, A maritime mirror shined bright like glass. A Cross reflection above the treeline. Division between like a deep abyss. Surface tension broken with just a touch. Stepping out onto on top of the brine. Moving Minds;Disturbing Thoughts;Did So Much Don’t worry Child, You did it All just fine. Passing beneath, under the overpass, After walking thru a long dark tunnel, Finally reaching Critical Mass; Then Rose up high, airborne in a cloud funnel. For you and I, He gave his life: He died. Rising again revived; the Son survived.
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priscilla-e-looney
Published
Apr 10, 2016
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I'm unsure if the title should be something else; Suggestions?

Shakespearean Sonnet Form, 10 syllables per line

abab; cdcd; efef; gg

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