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It's so gratifying to realize that I don't care what you're up to Post-deluge-of-Dilaudid. Or Adder-all-outta-luck Where the beige meets the blue, and The cat's smelling flowers, and We're squished in this chair, here, But you don't give a **** This was supposed to be the Maiden voyage of The S.S. Dog-Staying-Home-Alone But, instead, familiar Anxious chills, and shaky Hands, and aching bones... Hell, Baltimore is burning, whilst Nepal just falls apart. Sun beams, young, and up-and-coming, Never getting called to start. Does the wind smell So sickly, did it die? With the rest of me? Is this that "long-count to thirty?" Am I being too wordy? "Stop rhyming, we need to drink."
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May 15, 2015
May 15, 2015 at 8:57 PM UTC
The Maiden Voyage of the S.S. Dog-Staying-Home-Alone (Lovelution II)
It's so gratifying to realize that I don't care what you're up to Post-deluge-of-Dilaudid. Or Adder-all-outta-luck Where the beige meets the blue, and The cat's smelling flowers, and We're squished in this chair, here, But you don't give a **** This was supposed to be the Maiden voyage of The S.S. Dog-Staying-Home-Alone But, instead, familiar Anxious chills, and shaky Hands, and aching bones... Hell, Baltimore is burning, whilst Nepal just falls apart. Sun beams, young, and up-and-coming, Never getting called to start. Does the wind smell So sickly, did it die? With the rest of me? Is this that "long-count to thirty?" Am I being too wordy? "Stop rhyming, we need to drink."
I didn't write this as a sequel but it was the poem I wrote next and they are almost two perspectives on the same conversation
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May 15, 2015
May 15, 2015 at 8:57 PM UTC
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