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Dhè coimhlionta mould ( God's perfect mold) Scottish Gaelic dialect

by @brandon-nagley

Some only seest her flesh And her bones; I seest God's handprint That brushstroked Her soul. Some only heed her outer Reflection; I seest a masterpiece In paradisal direction. Some only observe her comings And going's; Not perceiving Her tears, beyond year's; Hath been like white water's flowing. Some only descry Her Filipina eyne; Whilst under her roof She's lonesome, aloof; Pain is her daily bread, As is her heart's Screaming proof. Some only espy, the girl They seek to know; not Knowing nothing of who She really is, an Angel from God's throne. Though this Queen doesn't seest What I seest, she is blinded by Worldly lies; demon's art her Enemies, because she's God's coruscating light. If only she could take a step Out of her body and her mind; She'd be free, to perceive The treasure she is As the creator made Her after his Kind. If only she could Seest, the elegance Inside her soul; She would Knowest She was Created to be God's light, lamp; God's perfect mold. ©Brandon Nagley ©Lonesome poets poetry ©Earl Jane Sardua nagley ( agapi mou) dedicated
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Written by
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Published
Jul 28, 2016
Time
4m
Notes

Seest- archaic for the word ( see).

paradisal- of a place or state) ideal or idyllic; heavenly.

Heed- take notice of, pay attention to.

Hath- have.

descry- catch sight of.

Eyne- archaic for eyes.

Filipina+ Filipino woman or a girl.

Whilst- while.

Espy- get sight of.

coruscating- sparkling.

Art- is ( are) archaic form.

Knowest- know.

Mold- a distinctive and typical style, form, or character.

I wrote this for my queen because she always cuts herself down, and as humans ,humans tend to always just see ones flesh blood and bones ( appearance of the outer being)  as my queen always just sees herself as completelya monster and ugly! And others tend to see others of just flesh and bones not seeing the person is hurting inside and feels broken alone down and out, and feels of no worth! Point to poem is I wish my queen Jane could step out of her body, as if an out of body experience and be next to god to show her how he made her perfect. Our gospel in the Bible said god made man in his image . Man and woman both! God is light and love as Bible speaks! Meaning Jane you are made in that image, yet you consider yourself ugly because of a few pimples? Lol, lets be honest your flesh appearance is beyond gorgeous and stunning and queen like and beautiful but more than that!!!! Your soul and your spirit is a light! Your real being the REAL you your soul. Is the most beautiful thing I've ever seen! It's completely light and there are others who need to know flesh and blood is just flesh and blood and isn't the real you! The real you is your soul! The beauty of the soul! And there are many lights out there like my queen Jane who feels the same as Jane! And Jane I want to tell you, your a light and you come from the creator of all light and lights!!! You come from god Jane! God made you beautiful inside and out! Time to wake UP and see that my love. Satan loves to make others feel as nobody's. To feel worthless! You were bought with a price Jane when Christ died for you when you accepted him as Lord and saviour Christ had prior already bought you for the price of his blood on that cross!!! That's more than beautiful! Your a daughter of god! And or light! NEVER EVER forget that! Understand me? Mas Mahal Kita my Reyna! Pray you see your beauty sooner than later love!

I love you more queen

Innibig Kita jane!!!!

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#lovers#king#soulmates#queen#jane#earl#hari#reyna#nagley#showing-you-yourbeauty
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