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Kaleidoscope

by @Wings_of_Freedom

You Intriguing sparkles As I peer in, Curious; Earnest to learn more About you. I yearn To admire you Through a kaleidoscope, Watch the crystals crash perfectly The beautiful imperfections blend Into unique shapes Of you. I so desire To fit us both Into a kaleidoscope, Watch us collide like fate And fuse Into breathtaking art Reflecting each other As the kaleidoscope of life Endlessly turns. Uncertain It is, But one day perhaps I pray It'll freeze, Everlasting Where our feelings meet.
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Published
Nov 23, 2018
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2m
Notes

Wasn't sure if adding the last stanza would make the poem less nice, but I reaally wanted to convey the feeling of uncertainty instead of the "person" being sure of this love. I want to show the immense love she has, but that she is actually unsure whether he likes her too.

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