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The Weather That Refused to Set the Mood

⭐ THE UNPOLISHED SEASON — Poem V

 

The weather didn’t help.

Not with mood,

not with meaning,

not with anything, really.

 

The rain arrived first –

not dramatic,

not cleansing,

not trying to set a scene,

just wet.

It slid down the window

like someone too tired

to knock.

 

The wind followed,

shoving a recycling bin

into the street

with the bored persistence

of a cashier on hour nine.

 

The sun tried once,

leaning through the clouds

with a weak, apologetic glow,

then gave up

and went back to wherever

it keeps its better days.

 

Nothing outside

matched anything inside.

No metaphors,

no parallels,

no poetic weather report

to explain the morning.

 

Just a sky

that refused to participate,

a sidewalk

that didn’t care who stepped on it,

and a day

that wasn’t setting any mood

for anyone.

 

Which, honestly,

felt about right.

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Written by
VerseBuster
48 / M / Poland
Published
May 20
Lines·Words
39·143
Notes

The weather joins the quiet rebellion of the season.

Rain that’s just wet, wind that’s overworked, sunlight that clocks out early – all of it perfectly indifferent.

Another unpolished moment in a world that refuses to perform.

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#theunpolishedseason#everydaypoetry#quietabsurdity#tiredweather#weatherpoem#minimalism#domesticphilosophy#unpolishedself#ordinarymoments#softrebellion
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