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The Girl Who Wished For Quiet and Remembered in Detail

"Open, to love?" He inquires.

 

"Keep your voice down," she insists in a near whisper. "They'll hear you."

 

He frowns.

 

"Please don't be sad." She attempts to soothe.

 

She feels tonight an afterthought,

but she never forgets.

Usually.

 

She climbs the mountain face

in a host of ropes and chores,

he is below it, entangled in the throes

of his own pressures.

 

She regrets looking so curious at him

during Sunday nap time,

right after his ********* had put her

on the ninth cloud.

 

There's the memory of

the rocket landing,

followed by a pilgrimage of stars,

and his heartfelt song

about her *******

 

She recalls being tied to the tracks,

and all the inherent noise

of his uphill engine

about to blow its stack.

 

It meant the world to him.

 

"Perhaps tomorrow night..." She tries to appease him with.

 

Until she remembers she is

a committed wife,

and this is the thing they schedule

on Wednesdays after the kids

are settled in bed.

 

She gifts him a warm smile,

and he returns an understanding one.

 

It means the world to her.

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Written by
Carlo-C-Gomez
56 / M / The Exclusion Zone
Published
May 19
Lines·Words
34·182
Notes

Title taken from the poem "Detail" by Sonja

 

https://hellopoetry.com/poems/5309001/detail

Tags
#marriage#children#schedule#exhaustion#intimacy#love#time#parenthood
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