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Oblivious

She roams the unknown, tracing the dark

I try to follow her steps, this flower carving the winds

Dancing gently through the air, luring me into the drowning marsh

This pale blossom of the night, gracefully fading to black

 

An aroma plumes, decay crawls

Withering slowly to an end, begging the mercy of the stars

Her petals bleed colour, before one unwilling to see the world gray

If only I could hold her, encase her my grasp

 

Swaying delicate before an ignorant sky, twirling alone in a field of scars

She who used to shake with fervor, trembles now doubtful and afraid

She descends unto the waters,

the heavens lament her fate

Floating on a surface of oblivion,

she refuses the moon's gaze

 

And she reaches this pond's depths,

I scrape my knees and foul my hands

And in horror I ponder

"What if my love was more than my care?"

 

This striking sweetflower was following the sun, and I was casting the cruelest shade

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Pankratious
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Published
Feb 18
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Notes

Old flames extinguish the most dramatically (also I hate doing the tagging game cause it's like me labeling what I want people to get from my words, so not gonna be doing that for the time-being)

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