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I evoked you. left. And just so. Few tears shed on the way there and back. The towering walls, ashen, ditto the ceiling but darker. it allows everything to fall through I'm being told to close my eyes, shut my mouth— the mouth in my head; the head my mouth will soon be missing. I took the landscape with me. I stood looking backwards. Snapshots came back blurred. Unnerved by a palace where inside is outside. with and without.
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Sep 29, 2025
Sep 29, 2025 at 11:21 AM UTC
with and without
I evoked you. left. And just so. Few tears shed on the way there and back. The towering walls, ashen, ditto the ceiling but darker. it allows everything to fall through I'm being told to close my eyes, shut my mouth— the mouth in my head; the head my mouth will soon be missing. I took the landscape with me. I stood looking backwards. Snapshots came back blurred. Unnerved by a palace where inside is outside. with and without.
August 9, 2025. Westward in the clouds above North America. Flight from NYC to LA.
EvelynYiningChen
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Sep 29, 2025
Sep 29, 2025 at 11:21 AM UTC
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