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That's What She Said

by taylor-reese

There is a boy walking, maybe ten or eleven, a skateboard under one arm, his shirt branded with THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID. And I wonder, what did she say? Did she say she liked his tricks or his ratty sweatshirt? Did he blush, swishing his hair in response, exuding confidence and cockiness, in the mean time remembering his mother, calling out to him before he left the house. Did she say “Son, don’t forget your helmet!” Even though he was already gone— Or was she really a he, who sat him down a few months ago and said he’d be gone for awhile that he’d see him soon— it’s been six months— and maybe, when the boy heard this, he ran out. And maybe when he gets older maybe he will run out more often, to hang out with those who are deemed to be “the wrong crowd” and he will be drunk and high, stumbling under the streets, above the lights, hearing-but-not-hearing everything that she is telling him. She is telling him the secrets of the universe.
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taylor-reese
Published
May 28, 2014
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Written in imitation of Matthew Dickman's style, mostly by way of hinge points. Feedback is great :)

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