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Exploring hands encounter no defence; Recollecting endeavours drives her to a dry pain Throbbing, throbbing Hamlet's hamartia discards her to the lowest of the dead His vanity requires no response; Her life on the line and he's got nothing to lose.   So much more the eye can see Caressing, caressing Her brain allows one half-formed thought to pass;   Leave me, carbuncle: Words she has never been able to utter . . . Loudly, she thinks it It doesn't translate Shivering, quivering Brittle monster bestows one final patronising kiss   I must exercise some form of self control Hardly aware of her departed lover, She lays in a yellow blanket; Phosphenes in the emerging light of day.
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Apr 22, 2015
Apr 22, 2015 at 2:10 PM UTC
when lovely woman stoops to folly
Exploring hands encounter no defence; Recollecting endeavours drives her to a dry pain Throbbing, throbbing Hamlet's hamartia discards her to the lowest of the dead His vanity requires no response; Her life on the line and he's got nothing to lose.   So much more the eye can see Caressing, caressing Her brain allows one half-formed thought to pass;   Leave me, carbuncle: Words she has never been able to utter . . . Loudly, she thinks it It doesn't translate Shivering, quivering Brittle monster bestows one final patronising kiss   I must exercise some form of self control Hardly aware of her departed lover, She lays in a yellow blanket; Phosphenes in the emerging light of day.
Honestly, half this poem is T S Eliot's "The Fire Sermon"
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Apr 22, 2015
Apr 22, 2015 at 2:10 PM UTC
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