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Jay Forrest Mar 2013
So here's a piece of advice
Let go when you're hurting too much
Give up when love isn't enough
And move on when things are t like before
And it's certain there's someone out there who will love you even more*
Don't consider the years wasted
Or the time lost
All those people,
They're residual
You wouldnt be you
If they weren't them
And right now
You're youer than you've ever been
I've been doing a lot of guided writing. They will not be edited and i will post all of them as is so if they **** or make no sense bear with me it's all part of the process. The part in italics is a line from somewhere else I ripped randomly and built off of. I would love feed back on them. More pieces like this to come!!!
Jay Forrest Mar 2013
Jesus Christ, that's a pretty face*
To indite such a sight is border line sin
I've been doing a lot of guided writing. They will not be edited and i will post all of them as is so if they **** or make no sense bear with me it's all part of the process. The part in italics is a line from somewhere else I ripped randomly and built off of. I would love feed back on them. More pieces like this to come!!!
Jay Forrest Mar 2013
Things change and friends leave
And life doesn't stop for anybody*
It's a fast paced world
If you can't keep up they'll knock you down
The land lord doesn't care that jimmy got sick and you had to use the rentoney for antibiotics
*******. Pay me.
Car broke down?
*****
*******. Pay me.
Grandma died?
I don't care
Pay me.
That's the kind of world we live in *****
So *******
And pay me
I've been doing a lot of guided writing. They will not be edited and i will post all of them as is so if they **** or make no sense bear with me it's all part of the process. The part in italics is a line from somewhere else I ripped randomly and built off of. I would love feed back on them. More pieces like this to come!!!
Jay Forrest Feb 2013
Don't tell me your idea of what I want to hear
Tell me what I need to hear
The truth
Hurt my feeling
Make me cry
I promise you it's all worth while
Slap me with your words
Maim me with your thoughts
The outcome might be way different than you originally thought
Jay Forrest Feb 2013
I want to change my punctuation
I long for exclamation marks,
But I'm drowning in ellipses
Warm Bodies
Isaac Marion
Jay Forrest Feb 2013
**** everything. I'm going to sleep.*
I don't need this
I don't need you
You and your pernicious words
You send them my way like bullets
Piercing with each period
Cutting with each comma
Turning semicolons into semiautomatics
I've been doing a lot of guided writing. They will not be edited and i will post all of them as is so if they **** or make no sense bear with me it's all part of the process. The part in italics is a line from somewhere else I ripped randomly and built off of. I would love feed back on them. More pieces like this to come!!!
Jay Forrest Jan 2013
To my life of my relationship that didn't work
To the map of the human heart
Sought at the age of 15
When I lost my virginity to a lady slightly older
Like most younger boys, it was based on the many lies i told her
Just to hold her and to show her
I had so much to prove
Like i had more experience than she thought i knew
And even though it wasn't true, It was amazing
But it ended because I did what most boys do
Listen to the lies and the rumors of a fool
Which ultimately led to this poor girl getting socked in the jaw in the middle of school
And even though I didn't do it,
I felt like i was the one to blame
Because the girl that hit her was the cousin of the man that insulted my game
Now a days it just doesn't seem cool
Now tell me what the hell am I supposed to do
Then a wise man told me "The only way out, is the way through"
extreemly old piece
not what you guys are used to
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