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Jan 2014 · 624
Sun
George Atkinson Jan 2014
Sun
Sand wheezes over the dunes
a fiery sea unfurled
the suns wrath slowly consumes
the last life left in the world.
...
In shade a sidewinder glides
out of a human skull
the home in which it confided
would have basked in the lull.
...
A turbine blade protrudes nearby
turning slowly... to rust
the cause it fought for eats it alive
hope crumbled to dust.
...
OK. I'm not a Greenpeace activist, or even for that matter much concerned about the inevitable crisis that we are told to be jumping into. It's freezing outside, so I wrote down the title 'sun', and elaborated from there. Thus it's turned into a brief rant (albeit depressing one) at the uselessness of our politicians (at least in the UK) when they tackle renewable energy. The very subject gets me heated (!) so I refuse to digress. Sorry (again) at how dark the subject matter is (!)... and the bad jokes... but I hope to compensate for it all soon!
Jan 2014 · 1.0k
Head in the Clouds
George Atkinson Jan 2014
She ascends the plane. The plane might ascend.
She immediately comprehends
How on earth will she stifle her cries
''You won't be on earth'' her head replies.
The metal box purrs and roars to life
She doesn't have time to say her goodbyes.

...Tempestuous earthquakes in the sky
Preposterous thoughts infect the mind
Of falling, falling through the clouds...
Fear take hold and pulls her down...
Faster, faster into the ground...

Awakes. Inhales. A bawling baby fails
To lift her dropping spirits. Exhales.
Relief. No mask required to breath.
The hell that dwelt inside her mind
Was deeper than what's beneath.

Complimentary napkins to the head
On board cardboard digested
Fear is weaker but it clings
Like a constrictor on the wing
'Snakes on a plane' she thinks
A smile that's almost willing
Surfaces, but the plane shakes it away.
Smiles are reserved for better days
For now she's bolted to the chair
She returns to the nightmares...
Boy, it's been a while. Here I have a reasonably disturbing start to the year - I feel it may not be finished, but I want to release something, so here I go! Enjoy and Happy New Year
Dec 2013 · 543
Out of the Frying Panic...
George Atkinson Dec 2013
It's so bright
You can't see behind you
You can't fight
for your life, they'll find you
They'll find you
I am a needle
Pop goes my head
like a balloon in a haystack but I'll wet it I'm feeble
They'll see you they'll see you they'll see you...
Hide for your life
Run forest
run to the forest to the middle don't fiddle
don't MOVE don't make a sound
even if they're not there they'll HEAR YOU
so don't flinch when the vines choke
you stick like gum but don't swallow
they'll eat you you're hollow you
run like the wind... you're gone...
In your lair, your pit of despair they can't reach you, you're safe and they can't crack you,
It's so dark.
They can't see behind you
The tables are turned, their cards fall to the floor
Burn them and rejoice.
Wrote this in a suitably frantic fashion in about 10 minutes. About social anxiety. Or madness. I think... :P
George Atkinson Dec 2013
The man with the beard and/or a hat
(Although it isn't cold)
Walks past the man with none of that
For he is not so bold.

The pretty girl ignores her dates
She's plugged them all away
Together they are separate
Together they're astray.

The man who stares at screens all day
A slave to the machines
His routine route he can't escape
Even in his dreams.

The man with the Windsor knot and suit
Looks down on them like ants
He would crush them under his foot
If God gave him a chance.

The girl who holds her fathers hand
Thinks they all look the same
She sees the man with nothing and
Ask's him for his name.

''I have no name, for I have nought''
The predictable reply
She thought that he had more, no doubt
Than all these passers by.

For the man is the rock that shapes the land
Embedded in the ground
Around him move the grains of sand
That try to tear him down.

The girl, like other pebbles, drown
In the unforgiving sea
Her father dragging her back down
To our society.
OK, so what's going on!? Version 2!
Let me explain.
Being a (relative) rookie to this website I feel I have made some errors - namely, in the ecstatic rush of getting followers/likes/etc., I have rushed my recent poems to get them out and about - however looking back I found this unsatisfactory. Frankly, I have been greedy. It was bad for the poems and and improvement for myself as a poet. So, here I show a new poem, a refreshed poet and I am a happy chappy.
If you recall, this is about 'sondering' and those people I see (well, we see) walking in the streets, to their trains or whatever, whom we'll never know about! Most of this was written on a bus, if that helps.
Enjoy!
George Atkinson Dec 2013
You!
Hey.
Good-day.
I presume.
Pessimistic flu.
Hypocritical to annoy.
The poor man's Rolls Royce
-is the pessimists one good choice.

They live with fragility,
-unwilling rigidity,
-and rarely tranquility.

Some weep at morbid memories,
-others at faithless fantasies,
-do they (or you?) see the precipices
-between the then, now and will be?

So what if you take a blue bruising back-slap
-for your lacking, a juicy reminding
-for regretful whining, lifetime timing,
-miraculous hopes of a future shining
-because you're wasting your time
-and not even minding!

So listen, or in duller cases, read;
-thoughts are naught but mares and dreams,
-man made mind transparencies
-will's the sum of immediacies
-like waiting in your station
-but you're deciding the destination
-your journey fundamentally what you make it
-it's simple but pessimists are complicated
-would you not trade freedom for a life you hated?

Pessimistic man, forget it
Ranting is silly - you just don't get it
You didn't see the golden beauty I bet it
Gold is copper to you anyway
What would Fibonacci say!
OK, so here is φ completed completely!
If you are not aware of it, φ is the golden ratio - considered to be the perfect, most beautiful number. Many things in nature and architecture seem to have been designed by it - I promise if you give it a brief Google you should find it a bit interesting.
So as a monument to its awesomeness, the verse and syllable structure of this is based on the Fibonacci sequence - a close cousin of φ, as I'm sure you may discover. There should be more maths poems, but if this is all then I hope you like it. If there are any other patterns here, it was accidental!
Dec 2013 · 819
Mandela
George Atkinson Dec 2013
He lived for
Fought for
Suffered for
And died for

Peace

And he will rest in it forever more.
I wish I grew up seeing him as the world does - but from what little I've seen of him, I am sure he will never be forgotten.
Dec 2013 · 1.1k
The Perfect Job
George Atkinson Dec 2013
Monochrome buildings pave the way,
It's another monotonous day at the office.
And so starts my favourite routine
The required daily dose of caffeine
Sickly sweet sugar supplements
Occasional visits to the gents
Where in the tranquility
I can ponder what I'd like to be...

...Living so high the clouds are the sea,
No responsibilities!
I don't have to dress,
The butler can take care of the mess.
Jacuzzis, cruises, friends who I choose,
Admiring reflections in gold plated loos',
But perhaps I digress...

...Back to reality I guess.
If time flies when you're having fun,
Then pressing keyboards all day long
Makes every second crawl a marathon!
But I can multitask a bit.
I can breath and walk and talk and sit
While simultaneously pressing a button
And at the same time doing next to nothing!
But even then I can scavenge my mind,
And if I'm lucky I will find
That little paradise of mine...

...And faster than the eye can see,
I am covered in girls in bikinis
Whilst crashing Lamborghinis
Into modern art reflections,
Of my many types of perfection.
And I'll roll out, unharmed and afar
There's a feast for my eyes like caviar...

And if you find that hard to believe,
My imagination comes for free!
So I understand your private confession
That I must have the perfect profession.
Dec 2013 · 557
? (or, 'Question Mark')
George Atkinson Dec 2013
I couldn't deny that I might not be confused.
I hope that that sentence doesn't make you bemused.
Then why do I write it?
Because I do as I choose,
I choose to *****, lose then cruise,
I thought you knew the news
That I have nothing to lose?
Then who are you to accuse
That I rhyme too often?
There, that should soften
The blows don't bruise.
If only I knew
How to Stop.
This was, if you forgive the phrase, poetic diarrhoea. Lovely randomness :)
Dec 2013 · 495
Lucidity (or Lucy D. T.)
George Atkinson Dec 2013
Pinch yourself and don't feel pain
Earth bound shackles held you down
But strawberry fields let go.

See your childhood love again
Feelings lost can here be found
Play together in the snow.

Drift in limbo through the rain
Watch your past and futures drown
All your thoughts you used to know.

Dive down the darkest abyss
Killing the lurking fiends you find
Here they'll sing about your fights.

Glide through times murkiest mists
Leave all your worries behind
Lose the need of wrong or right.

Climb to the top of your bliss
Behold your wonderful mind
Cry your oceans at the sights.

Jump of the tallest tower
Realise you're falling faster
Your fears come back to haunt you.

Resist but void's your power
She's there but you fall past her
Mephistopheles pulls you.

Your streets open like flowers
He peels the stone like plaster
Fall into his jaws and through...

...Out the other side it's clear
Embrace the one you hold dear
Think of your potential here.
Based on lucid dreaming, a real phenomenon where the dreamer knows he is dreaming (NOT taken from inception!). It shows the restrictions that our (real) world places on us by comparing it with the blissful freedom of your dreams. However despite this, we must embrace what we have.
Nov 2013 · 278
4 Letters
George Atkinson Nov 2013
As flower to the bee
As she is to me.
A bit cringy yes, but that is a burden all these ****** love poems have to bear. :)
Nov 2013 · 816
Tides of Change
George Atkinson Nov 2013
Hammocks hamper an oceans intent
To disturb a slumbering crew.
Moonlight shatters over the East
To guide them through the blue.

The cabin walls of woven timber
Moaning in the swell.
The Captain sleeps on rustic papers
Creased like cockle shells.

Our hero, Crow, sits on his nest.
Discussing with the stars
How a world with all this peace
Could not result in war.

Constellations slowly recede.
Tides rise with the sun.
And withered clouds of discontent
Sprinkle the horizon.

And so the skies revealed to Crow
That darkness follows light.
The deepest trenches end in shores
So death must end in life.

At this, our hero killed the crew.
The silence was his blade.
He sank the ship before the storm
Took the friends he'd made.

The waves dragged the ship and men
To their heaven in the depths.
They rest in peace forever more
As in life, in death.
Based on Aesops fables - short moral stories with animals as the main character. The unmentioned God who controls this world is evil and Crow sees that and takes his friends away from him!
Nov 2013 · 484
The Phoenix
George Atkinson Nov 2013
Sky blue eyes
As clear as the lies
From filthy guilty crimson lips.
Her icy hands trying to grip
She couldn't hold my burning gaze
I threw my love into the blaze.

Wry goodbyes
To both our past lives
I watch them returning to dust.
One last embrace of fiery lust
Reset the clocks and walk away
But I'll smell her flowers someday.
Nov 2013 · 726
Red Rubber Band
George Atkinson Nov 2013
Red rubber band,
World in your hand.
Day by day,
It decays.
Its time will come.
An elastic gun
For fun? Perhaps,
Until it snaps.
Left on the floor,
Worth nothing no more.
Red rubber band.
One of my first (ever) poems, which when looking back at it could represent the world crisis, global warming, etc. I promise I intended none of that however
Nov 2013 · 538
A fragment
George Atkinson Nov 2013
Drunk on sunshine.
Snowy peaks and clouds entertwine,
As we, racing through the meadows green...
If only it wasn't a dream.

Daylight reveals to weary eyes
The cold truth behind the lies.
Leaden skies grace the morn:
They are as tough as being torn
From the bedsheets I embraced.
I thought about making more of it, but look back I was happy with it as it is - a fragment
Nov 2013 · 1.0k
No Sudden Moves
George Atkinson Nov 2013
Twitch of the eye, recorded.
Beads trickle down rippled foreheads.
The Voice is loud, but lips are sealed.
The pawns thoughts remain concealed
As the mad King addresses the board.

The cameras don't feel the chill
Nor the barrels, aiming still
Yet as the hairs on the necks, they stand
Fellow comrades of the land
Blandly hiding their rebellious wills.

His voice is ice, his head is earth.
His heart is fire but his gaze averts
The marble army changing sides
And as the jester laughs and cries,
Whites turn black and aim as one
And fire as if through just one gun.

No sudden moves
But the King is down.
No one comes to claim the crown.
Written during the North Korean antics, at a time I was coincidentally reading 1984 and the Communist Manifesto simultaneously! The speaker can be any reasonably tyrannical dictator that comes to mind.

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