I can feast again, reading aloud enjoying sounding hosted meanings encapsulated in every word, phrase, line, and stanza!

I am here rich in the aromas and taste of poetry!

Screaming for MORE of the same!

I am a glutton spewing my greed!

Spouting critique....

Where others might give a long mmmmmmmmm

or worse dribble

- Well Written
- thought provoking
- very pretty
- Nicely done

Sadly, I could not dream up such delicacies or brew this heady wine, but can only burp and share it's scented flavours!

Feasted full, resting in your shadow amongst a company of quiet images I ride for more on the morrow**

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Lacking of life now
I lol on my fine divan
Laziness often
lacks the power of rapture
as in sofa or bedsprings

Labour of love her
for large obese lobster me
Mermaids capture me
a symphony of sea-sick
rasping tongues lick our lumps

Little old lady
typing the language of love
A real cyber date
computer romance limits
operational life's love

Laughing over lines
of disco ****- pure *******
Lewd obscene language
grasping lemon or lime highs
to count Hollywood star shootings

A full length of life
the longing off, lay proceeds
Lady of the Lake
lunging our lisps sound depths
we are - breathing harmony

The land of Lincoln
legion of Lucifer's Lord
landscaping of lawns,
losing our liberty's law,
leaving on lights, blinding

Lots of Laughs or 'lol'
populist abbreviation*
language often less,
leftovers of literate
gone to libraries of late

Celestial scholars
deliver influencing scripts
days brisk with drumbeats
evenings spilled from riverbanks -
drifts of violet, ripe moons.

A life for living
make creativity your song
let all sorrow go
our tomorrows fade too fast
every moment so precious

Your choices to own
claim to have truly lived
be free like a bird
soar to the highest mountain
feel the breeze beneath your wings

All will surely die
your body is not a chore
the energy life
is eternal, infinite
and clothed in velvet breathing

Life's ageing busy pace
relax -  observe and still time
neither thoughts nor none
hum a song about the stars
or astronomy lessons

Dwell in loving peace
share spiritual sustenance
imperfect mirage—
unbend, barefoot in its shade
languid afternoons, blessings.

Hearing poetry's grace
Echoes that laugh-lust-cry-love
relentlessly true.
Souls rapture joined - bestowed
kiss softly devastating.

A world awakes
in spaces of wonderment.
Slows worries until -
our eyes open: Surprise Splendors
Treating earth like a lover

Refining senses -
resilient beauty touched.
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Submit your *2 line 5/7  challenging verses then your *3 line 5/7/7 answering verses in a 'reaction' please

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This is awesome mate
She did not understand - the
artistry in you

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Awesome comment made
always stroking and patting
Critique most welcome
  

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