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Danielle Allen Jun 2011
Mirror Mirror on the wall
Who the prettiest of them all
Her head held high; her shoulders tall
Mirror Mirror on the wall
She said she would never fall

Mirror Mirror on the wall
She saw the boy while at the mall
He broke her heart; he made her bawl
Mirror Mirror on the wall
How could she feel so small?

Mirror Mirror on the wall
Watch her break and watch her fall
Her body shakes; she tries to crawl
Mirror Mirror on the wall
Here’s the girl who lost it all
Okay. So I haven't been writing very long, but I would like some feedback.
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Danielle Allen Jun 2011
I hide behind my smile in the effort you won’t see
All the fears and all the tears that haunt me constantly

The fear that you don’t love me, the tears that swiftly follow
The fear I’ll be alone; the feeling is so hollow

The tears I cry when we fight; the fear that you’ll be gone
The image of me without you keeps me up till the break of dawn

I sometimes feel like there’s an empty void
But I guess that’s just me; I’m just paranoid.

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