Mirror Mirror on the wall
Who the prettiest of them all
Her head held high; her shoulders tall
Mirror Mirror on the wall
She said she would never fall
Mirror Mirror on the wall
She saw the boy while at the mall
He broke her heart; he made her bawl
Mirror Mirror on the wall
How could she feel so small?
Mirror Mirror on the wall
Watch her break and watch her fall
Her body shakes; she tries to crawl
Mirror Mirror on the wall
Here’s the girl who lost it all
Okay. So I haven't been writing very long, but I would like some feedback.
Thank You to everyone who takes the time to give me some advice!