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Cliffy Buglione Apr 2014
In an effort
To seperate himself
From his his
Agonising loneliness
He pursues his echo
From the burning wildernesss
He knows that one day
His pain will dissolve into redemption
But he can't face
his immediate existence
but life isn't one date
That leaves you at the cinema to wait
That's just something that didn't
go your way...Tomorrow as they say
It's just another day.
From 6th line the order of syllables as much as convention dictates the ordination 4 being mid-sentence with 4 syllable last line and first
  Mar 2014 Cliffy Buglione
Poppi Mae
I'm out of my mind
And I need a place to stay.
Could I enter yours?
I'll promise to keep all your secrets
Hidden away.

This place is unfamiliar,
Something I have never seen before.
Flashing images float around me
I hold onto them,
Knowingly,
That this is what it feels like for you.

I never payed attention to it before,
But every word you say,
Every action that you do,
Illustrates a perfect picture, in a powerful way.

Why have I been lingering outside of my mind?
Troubled thoughts, unforgiving images.
But these are tolerable.
It's time to escape your mind,
Now that I know
And start giving you the best that I can
Because I know,
And you know,
That I will never have this moment again.

I love you dear,
And that much is true.
Run away with me,
and we can disperse into the blue.
start appreciating what you have right in front of you, rather than taking it all for granted.
treat her the best that you possibly can.
Cliffy Buglione Mar 2014
If you are searching for a way
To illuminate our inner-self
And conquer the barriers inside us
Then I have a light for your smoke
May I introduce you to L'Bastardos.

If you're feeling low
For no particular reason you can think of
Then maybe it is time to be thinking of making love.

You've got all these hang-ups about cash flow,
And you are not too sure of how things will reveal themselves
Everything is taken care of and I will take full control-
Give me your body till morning, I don't need your mind presented to me,
And the Devil has your soul, I'm just seeing out the tenancy,  
The day has brought the sky to watch you play-
A thousand miles away.
First verse2 syllable difference 1-2 3-4 then 3 again on extra line. Because of fifth line deliberately placed the free-style is ordered into a ordered convention but without any connection from one line to next.
  Mar 2014 Cliffy Buglione
Poppi Mae
I'm out of my mind
but I'd like to enter yours.
mind
yours
curiosity
  Mar 2014 Cliffy Buglione
Poppi Mae
there's something about the moon
you said it looks so pretty
but the way the stars surround it
is something which takes the breath of many
that was the night you looked me in the eyes
and i swear not a single force on earth
could stop the constant shaking of my hand
and the increased heart rate inside my chest
and though i'll never say this out loud
the thought of you in my head remains
and i want to meet you once again
your arms around me
as we embraced the cold
though the feeling of being in your arms
could never grow old
Cliffy Buglione Mar 2014
I was too happy day after day
I was too happy for it to stay that way-
I was too content to stay by her side
Used to thank God every night
But somewhere in the back of my mind
There was some doubt about that girl of mine
But even as I try all that I can
I can't remember what gave it away about Wendy Ann.

I was locked within the love we shared
So grateful of the prison there
But it was joy itself which gave away to
                             uncertainty
Which was destined to be the end of Wendy plus
                                                            ­      me.

I was going in the right direction
I was floating on her affection
My first taste of love's perfection
Was only an after-taste of rejection.
First verse and third verse same syllable, syllable breakdown of 7-13 a line. 2nd verse, no two matching amounts of syllables used. No rhythm or freestyle. No freestyle because it is deliberately freestyle. Last verse all words end in tion. Beginnings of a rhythm Beginnings of 10 9 8 7 syllables but for freedom of expression last line 11.
Cliffy Buglione Mar 2014
The price we give to vanity
In the mirror of a loved one
We curse God's reflection-
And delve into depression
When want flies it's price
And seizes our esteem
Which disappears like ice
In the veins of our idolised doll

Come with me loved child
You seem to float around my identity
The way confetti crowds the vacancy
Of the doubtful past-
Echo me
Echo me

You'll never echo me
This paradise is painful
Because love is peculiar
And obsene to somebody
Who only witnesses the one they love
    In a place where nobody understands
The universe remains like an obsolete sentence
Scribbled by a troubled hand
Perhaps a death sentence in Bermuda
Perhaps, in a third place, Something that chills
Our perfect day.
first verse- syllable amount difference between one line and another 2.
Each line in last verse has a grammar mistake or other disorder(Echo me, being reflectively rheotorical. You cannot echo somebody else. Echo, echo, being in order. The past always certain rather than doubful. Rhythm sequence exists but is lost in memory.

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