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5.5k · Oct 2014
shooting star
carriselliott Oct 2014
A shooting star shines so bright when you are cosy and warm at night.
It prances by you when you walk past,a shooting star will always last.
A shooting goes really really fast.
Look at the future dont look to the past.
This star sparkles,it can dance in the dark.
WATCH OUT WATCH OUT see it spark!
All night long the shooting star will be sure to shoot off with a glitter.

my shooting star is my mum
by carris elliot
2.0k · Oct 2014
shooting star
carriselliott Oct 2014
shooting star is so bright when you are asleep so warm and cosy at night
hear her zoom past you on the night
older they get
on there own
they shoot off to space
in the moonlight they go by
now they are very rare
going off to space
star is our, ours only
take her every where i go
amy is her name
raing stars are wonderful  so very wonderfull indeed!

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