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Criticism comes, both good and bad,  
Sometimes it's helpful, sometimes it's sad.  
It might feel harsh, like a sudden blow,  
But it helps you learn and makes you grow.  

Some people point, “That’s not so great!”  
And you might feel a little hate.  
But listen close, there’s gold in there,  
To fix mistakes and show you care.  

Yet some just speak to make you frown,  
Their only goal? To drag you down.  
Ignore those words that have no aim,  
Don’t let them dim your inner flame.  

So take the good, leave the rest,  
Use their words to be your best.  
Criticism, though it may seem tough,  
Can shape you strong, and that’s enough!
A single mistake, a heavy strife,
Feels like walking a treacherous knife.

All day consumed by self-blame,
Seeking a remedy, like a jolly old game.

Lost my appetite and all taste,
Eatables now seem like a pointless chase.

Tossing and turning through the night,
Yearning for a glimmer of hopeful light.

But alas, what's done cannot be undone,
Back to the old path, where I'd begun.

Praying earnestly, it's all I can pursue,
Hoping that my wish will someday come true.
I’m big,  
Never small.  
I stand tall,  
Won’t fall.  

I’m my own,  
Can’t be cloned.  
I’m strong,  
Right where I belong.  

I’m me,  
That’s all I’ll be.  
One of a kind,  
With my own mind!
Frost mist and fog are gone
Lovely warm wind and sun risen upon

Melting the hearts and souls
Taking people out of their homes for rolls

Welcoming the month of February
The month of love
Everyone looking to fit in the glove

Some will succeed , some will fail
Leaving their weeping trail
Some will out of bail
Some will join the army if fail

Jokes apart I only want temperatures to be warm
Melting the frozen hearts without any harm
Love and peace prevail in air
pulling devil out of the hearts by its hair.
September  is the ninth month of the year

As it nights getting cold
It's covering earth with dried gold

As it unfolds further
It add an other feather

When the squirrels and sparrows hide themselves

The thrills it brings
For the most warm offerings

The September I am gonna miss
Saying goodbye with a tear and a kiss.
January is the first and it is covered with snow
It freeze us with a cold blow


February usher with warm rays, melting away the frozen vows

March bring pleasant Sunshine, warming the hearts filled with overflowing warmth carts

April comes with wind of joys, taking old time to destroy

May and June makes human melts, channeled to the masses belt.

July and August has same refrain, cooling down the human brain.

September bring the clear skies,When the spirits get new vibes.

October and November makes the stars to shoot, making people to shout to bloomin loot.

December comes with sleet, all hidden in warm haven with empty streets.
The body droops, the eyelids close
And all the world seems to impose

A weight that's heavy, hard to bear
A foggy haze, a numb despair

The limbs are heavy, slow to move
The will is weak, the mood is blue

But in this state, there's also rest
A chance to pause, to do your best

To breathe deep and let go of care
To find a calm that's always there

And when you wake, refreshed and new
You'll find the world more bright and true

For tiredness is a friend in need
That helps us rest and then succeed.
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