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sunshine-beam
sunshine-beam
I'm trying out my hand at poetry. I haven't done alot of study on forms yet; maybe I'll get around to that someday. But for now I just like to write what sounds good to my ears, from my heart. If you have any advice, or wish to critique any aspect of my writting feel free to messege me. / I love feedback.
*One handed melody picks out a tune a delightful sequence of notes improvised mystery behind every corner in single notes thirds, fourths and fifths the music's adventure blooms in this one handed melody* as my other hand brushes my teeth
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Apr 17, 2012
Apr 17, 2012 at 1:46 PM UTC
One Hand Melody
Oh butterfly how gracefully you fly through the woods the sun glows on your beautiful wings as you fly you come down for a landing on a rock in the gently flowing stream to get a drink then you take off to fly away to a daisy
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Apr 14, 2012
Apr 14, 2012 at 12:50 AM UTC
Oh Butterfly Fly
Evening meadow in November Glowing in sun's golden ember Wind whispers in the grasses Kestral screeching as he passes Giant storm clouds in the distance But above my head the sky is clear Birds singing in persistance Calling for the attention of my ear
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Apr 14, 2012
Apr 14, 2012 at 12:41 AM UTC
Evening Meadow
A silent peace...... so quiet..... so still a winter field...... so soft and tranquil misty frost glows on every grass blade while creation sings " I am what God has made." though nothing moves, and all seems dead gentle sunlight flows promising new life instead
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Apr 13, 2012
Apr 13, 2012 at 11:17 PM UTC
Winter's Song
Walking along the path today I spotted the humming bird he hovered s l o w l y   r o s e until almost out of sight Then in the blink of an eye he made a terrific dive and hovered once more and repeated his question: *"Darling do you love me? Will you be my bride? Will you raise your lovely children, with me by you side? Will you marry me?"* slowly again he rose and dove repeating "(my) Love?!"
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Apr 13, 2012
Apr 13, 2012 at 10:53 PM UTC
The Humming Bird's Question
Wind is blowing rustle pluck leaf falling whisper soft land
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Apr 12, 2012
Apr 12, 2012 at 11:56 PM UTC
Autumn (10 word poem)
Too many ways to go as many as the wind could blow I'm left relying on your hand to show the way which only you before hand know
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Apr 12, 2012
Apr 12, 2012 at 10:19 PM UTC
Too Many Ways
Time is a thing that changes Our scheduals vary, life rearanges   There are times that rush and others that hush   the racing whir called "growing up"   A life begins in a single moment and the soul inside is who should own it   on your birthday, mom and dad rejoice as you, precious child, first lift your voice   and cry One day, you take your first steps   Then eventually learn to express thoughts and concepts you see many exciting new places   and come to love many kind faces the school years come   mother says "Don't miss the bus or you'll be late!" in a few more years you're on your first date   the time of decision and the path you will choose comes all too quick and you need all the advice you can use   what kind of person will you become? Then you make an alliance that's like no other   because this special friend is also your lover and together you embark to conquer life   and overcome the struggles that can sting like a knife Tears and laughter, anger and grace   each has their time and all have their place you raise your family and teach your heart   and hope that what you've built wont fall apart Like the autumn wind, old age comes rattling the leaves that once were young your children have begun the time of their own and you have loved, taught, and shown the story of your time is told by the lines on your face and memories remain like delicate lace
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Apr 12, 2012
Apr 12, 2012 at 8:16 PM UTC
Life Time