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Irish Poet & Clarsair in the tradition of the Irish Bards. I use my art to say what I would not otherwise be able. Having experienced tragedy, I have found my poetry allows me release. It is my catharsis. I write prolifically when under stress. / / I left my adopted home in Venezuela when it simply became to dangerous to stay. Mi Pais reflects this. A friend of mine was killed by police as he returned from leading an overnight youth vigil at his church. He left behind a two year old daughter. To her, Mi Pais is dedicated. / / My style is an eclectic lyrical style. I prefer the rhyme and find weaving it in with pleasing cadence is a challenge which takes my mind off of other thoughts. I am endeavoring to write in Spanish as well as English. While I am fluent, I do not have the subtleties of the language that the native speaker does. Thus it is quite the challenge. I also have tried the Celtic aisling in Irish, Spanish and English, Aisling of a Shamed Lady. You be the judge.
The march of time has set our pace. We scurry along in life's mad race. Not time to enjoy life's pleasures. Rushing past all of God's treasures. The warm puppy pushed aside. Children ignored in life's wild ride. It's all the job, it's all our career. Success so distant, it's mirage appears near. When finally we stop and take a break. Our life is gone for our career's sake. A corner office or a gold watch does not replace, Your child gazing at you with love in their face. That boss you have struggled to please Will not nurse you through age and disease. This coming year stop, think and decide What really matters, family or the wild ride?
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Dec 31, 2010
Dec 31, 2010 at 11:28 AM UTC
Wild Ride
Years roll past as the endless seas, One after the other and never cease. When beginning, the end is not in sight. Young never see the limit of the light. Then comes the day, your immortality flies. You realize that everyone at last, dies. So then what have you at the final day? Of your life what will they say? Will you leave a legend, a glorious song? Or will they say you lingered far too long? As for me, I truly care not to bother. I please my God, my wife, myself, but no other. Those who seek the approval of all. Hobble their lives with chain and ball. Too many just stand in the crowd. Their criticism of others far too loud. Try as you might, they can not be pleased. With their own selves they are ill at ease. To relieve their own pain. They make little of your gain. It is a trap they lay. For their failure you pay. Leave them to their petty game. Let them not sully your name. It matters not what they will say. They will not be present on your judgment day.
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Dec 30, 2010
Dec 30, 2010 at 8:02 PM UTC
Judgment Day
A gull in profile on a rock Tang of salt laden air Crash of waves down below On my lips a silent prayer Oh that I could walk into the sea Leave behind the beach of sand Slip into her warm embrace Let her carry me in her hand Carry me ever so far away Leave me on a deserted shore There to find what I seek Then, only then, to roam no more.
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Jul 11, 2010
Jul 11, 2010 at 7:28 AM UTC
Rover
Your fingers stroke the clouds I gaze aloft at your boughs. Your trunk a mast as upon a ship I so small, insignifiacnt slip. Your interwoven tresses, what a sight! Puts where I stand dark as night Dark green moss your feet are shod By them, breezes cause ferns to nod To Heaven you reach e'er so slow Reaching before I arrived below. Someday in eternity I will look down See below your still questing crown Have you answers to that we seek? What could you tell if you could speak? About your base, what lives have passed? As you stood serene, Heaven in your grasp.
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Jul 11, 2010
Jul 11, 2010 at 7:19 AM UTC
Giants
Up past the clouds Up beyond the sky I lift my arms My hands on high. My fingers jump My fingers prance Up in Heaven My fingers dance Lustily, merrily, They roll down the strings Strumming and plucking Each one of them sings Sings with voices Angelic and sweet Trills and chords My joy is complete.
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Dec 16, 2009
Dec 16, 2009 at 4:05 AM UTC
Fingers Dancing in Heaven