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"whiplashes" poems
I remember it being cold that night. It was the first time I had walked away and worried I was leaving something. It wasn't the kind of cold that cut and made itself at home in your bones. It wasn't even the kind of cold That strained every breath to feel like your last. But I could feel the wind biting at and hanging from my ears while it whispered. But my mind was moving too fast to make memories, It seems to never have the time anymore. But it saves pictures like polaroids. Fast flashes of things passed like whiplashes and mass stashes of three picture days of everything and you. Flash: Legs around mine, light jeans, fluorescent lighting. My heartbeat heats at the thought of it. My back feels numb. Flash: Your smile in my headband, **** you're beautiful. I think you threw your head back and laughed. My arm tingles where you touched it. Flash: The sky was slate. Your eyes were asking me their first question. I wished I had chalk. But you already knew the answer. I try to tell you now what you already were then, But there aren't enough words in the world to tell you. To tell you that your eyes looked like lifesavers. To tell you that if I could, I would develop my dreams at the nearest hour drop shop and lay each frame out like a quilt and a collage. (Because my mind is full of a kind of mess that is never less than warming.) I would tell you that I hold your words under my tongue To make sure they're always delivered warm. And that if I leave them in there long enough the fire starts. My words melt into mercury like ice in boiling water. And I tell myself, That if anyone really knew the heat, They would stay the hell out of the kitchen. But I made you something.
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Sep 14, 2013
Sep 14, 2013 at 1:56 PM UTC
But I made you something.
I remember it being cold that night. It was the first time I had walked away and worried I was leaving something. It wasn't the kind of cold that cut and made itself at home in your bones. It wasn't even the kind of cold That strained every breath to feel like your last. But I could feel the wind biting at and hanging from my ears while it whispered. But my mind was moving too fast to make memories, It seems to never have the time anymore. But it saves pictures like polaroids. Fast flashes of things passed like whiplashes and mass stashes of three picture days of everything and you. Flash: Legs around mine, light jeans, fluorescent lighting. My heartbeat heats at the thought of it. My back feels numb. Flash: Your smile in my headband, **** you're beautiful. I think you threw your head back and laughed. My arm tingles where you touched it. Flash: The sky was slate. Your eyes were asking me their first question. I wished I had chalk. But you already knew the answer. I try to tell you now what you already were then, But there aren't enough words in the world to tell you. To tell you that your eyes looked like lifesavers. To tell you that if I could, I would develop my dreams at the nearest hour drop shop and lay each frame out like a quilt and a collage. (Because my mind is full of a kind of mess that is never less than warming.) I would tell you that I hold your words under my tongue To make sure they're always delivered warm. And that if I leave them in there long enough the fire starts. My words melt into mercury like ice in boiling water. And I tell myself, That if anyone really knew the heat, They would stay the hell out of the kitchen. But I made you something.
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A sparrow, tweets. A still creature somewhere in a yellow vacant tweets. An open-hearted orphan, tweets. Gloomy buds! They want to be flowers. Blood drifts through the head and whiplashes me for your affection. Emotionally choked by a memento-to-be makes me a burnt wood. Beheaded bodies collapsing; Time floods the corpses; ****** heads stick everywhere, as memories do. A dagger stabbed in flesh tears it away; Dripping blood, trumbling tissue; The progeny are all already slaughtered. A face is sprinkled by a loved one reddish gore, autopsying the memories. Unjust? Carnivore brutality? Celebrate the night when sun shines; Hear out the thunderous waterfall noise; Roll over on green to reach the orange warmth. Kiss, literally; Love, figuratively.
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Mar 27, 2018
Mar 27, 2018 at 3:52 AM UTC
Instincts hammering one another's heads
I) Eve Eve became Foolishly bold To give up Her faith in God. Exhibiting lust For a tantalizing apple She opted to be A dust; Heeding a snake- Incarnated Devil’s word “If you eat The forbidden fruit You will acquire Wisdom on par with God.” Duped by Satan Unfaithful, disobedient She turned a reason For the lapse of man. For lacking faith She heard, With jealousy Her son Kane ****** Her son Abel To death! “Eve tarnished The image Of the womenfolk!” We usually hear In a religious talk! II) Saint Mary From Birth to death Unwavering was In God Saint Mary’s faith. In her youth, Blind to earthly Allurements, When summoned To serve God Happy she drew forth “Displaying alacrity To the call of The Almighty Is my pleasure My duty!” Saint Mary knew Miracles untold Is capable to do God. Acid tested like Aglow set gold Threatened by Herod’s sword Scorned by hypocrites Hoary headed Christ killers Her faith she never Failed to tightly hold. In Golgotha The whiplashes all Were scars on her soul! Unlike many of us It is not like a fiction Or movie script She witnessed Christ’s crucifixion. She reconciled Man and God, Till to date And down the road This miracle will be told. She allowed a pride Womenfolk could ride. In the catalog of grace As she won a higher place In God’s face Above angels and Below God Is the row She was Allowed to hold. Like Saint Gabriel in the sky Like Elizabeth on earth Angels and human beings Praise her why? Doubt have not I She is Holy In a way description That defy! III) Devil Duping Eve The control on man Devil got Thanks to Saint Mary ‘s obedience, Before he realized   The mystery of incarnation, He lost. For via God- Saint Mary’s Chemistry mankind Is snatched from Devil’s grip and fold. To retaliate To belittle Saint Mary Still a python A snake, A sanctimonious preacher, A faithful That has gone astray Devil makes A frantic bid to date. In various religious forms He seeks a vent To disgorge His hate. Oblivious to The Virgin's word “Generations will Call me The graceful, the immaculate…” IV) God Via Saint Mary Once more The Almighty God Drew close Mankind to his fold! “For use and throw God use Saints!” Is the worst mistake Believers  could make Eating the poisonous cake Devil in various Religious forms bake.///
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Mar 28, 2020
Mar 28, 2020 at 5:50 AM UTC
What a contrast(Revised)
I) Eve Eve became Foolishly bold To give up Her faith in God. Exhibiting lust For a tantalizing apple She opted to be A dust; Heeding a snake- Incarnated Devil’s word “If you eat The forbidden fruit You will acquire Wisdom on par with God.” Duped by Satan Unfaithful, disobedient She turned a reason For the lapse of man. For lacking faith She heard, With jealousy Her son Kane ****** Her son Abel To death! “Eve tarnished The image Of the womenfolk!” We usually hear In a religious talk! II) Saint Mary From Birth to death Unwavering was In God Saint Mary’s faith. In her youth, Blind to earthly Allurements, When summoned To serve God Happy she drew forth “Displaying alacrity To the call of The Almighty Is my pleasure My duty!” Saint Mary knew Miracles untold Is capable to do God. Acid tested like Aglow set gold Threatened by Herod’s sword Scorned by hypocrites Hoary headed Christ killers Her faith she never Failed to tightly hold. In Golgotha The whiplashes all Were scars on her soul! Unlike many of us It is not like a fiction Or movie script She witnessed Christ’s crucifixion. She reconciled Man and God, Till to date And down the road This miracle will be told. She allowed a pride Womenfolk could ride. In the catalog of grace As she won a higher place In God’s face Above angels and Below God Is the row She was Allowed to hold. Like Saint Gabriel in the sky Like Elizabeth on earth Angels and human beings Praise her why? Doubt have not I She is Holy In a way description That defy! III) Devil Duping Eve The control on man Devil got Thanks to Saint Mary ‘s obedience, Before he realized   The mystery of incarnation, He lost. For via God- Saint Mary’s Chemistry mankind Is snatched from Devil’s grip and fold. To retaliate To belittle Saint Mary Still a python A snake, A sanctimonious preacher, A faithful That has gone astray Devil makes A frantic bid to date. In various religious forms He seeks a vent To disgorge His hate. Oblivious to The Virgin's word “Generations will Call me The graceful, the immaculate…” IV) God Via Saint Mary Once more The Almighty God Drew close Mankind to his fold! “For use and throw God use Saints!” Is the worst mistake Believers  could make Eating the poisonous cake Devil in various Religious forms bake.///
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A for Alcoholic she mutters noiselessly to her cherub feigning sleep in his night mare infested crib. B for Brute which her Knight morphs into every night inflicting invisible whiplashes on her now rusted dreams C for the curse which befell on their marital vows the day he first touched the stinking bottle D for Death she sreams to the silent night which comes neither to her nor HIM...
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Oct 27, 2010
Oct 27, 2010 at 6:34 AM UTC
Yin and Yang of Pain
it's so unfair that my head whiplashes, my eyes dart as if it's an archery event and you're the only target i found was worth releasing the bow from its arrow to and that my heart starts its musical number of blue songs and wild rock at the mere mention of your name and of anything that reminds me of you--and it's so unfair because i could easily forget names and appearances as if they're painted in the background but your name seems to be wedged inside my mouth, i have to look away from mirrors because everytime i smile i see it and you appear everywhere--in books, in journal entries, in high school buildings, in my living room floor, in convenient stores, in old forgotten 90s songs, in the streets with warm pavements, in boys who reminds me of you whose identities are now covered wih your favorite color until i could only see blue--and it's so unfair because i think of you on days I've promised I won't and I'm writing you another poem when you can't even text back i know my worth, you never saw mine i know your worth, and i bled everytime you cut me down with your gold edges because unlike how my head would turn, yours would look away and while my eyes searches for you, yours could see past through me and while my heart wails for you to notice, yours remain steady-paced, unaffected, unstirred it's so unfair, so unfair. Can you tell me when i can taste victory?
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Mar 6, 2016
Mar 6, 2016 at 5:30 AM UTC
losing battle
Scampering through the wilderness in the ashen lands of which were smog, I stumbled and had startled till day's glistening embers burned out the fog, With little practicality for a promised tomorrow, Its fiery scars to shed nothing but sorrow - And due to all of this unkempt malice, It had embellished a flurry of flames from within its chalice. And at once the world was a dark, cold place, With nothing but a hollowed sun to meet face. And within the facade of a formerly safe path, Followed a new fume of earth's merciless wrath. So, upon a mountain I came to stop, Watching the scanty sun fade to a blue teardrop, Before, at last, it had gone, Retired from earth nearest the split of dawn. And thus blue clouds had crusted the sky, Winds chanting rain with agitated sigh - Until alas offence was taken, and henceforth came their cry, Lashing outwards onto human skin, Frustration to ooze and bubble with sin. Fog had began to smolder the air, As my breaths drew short and started to flare, Yet nothing could be done to reverse this end, Not anyone left could ever seek to mend, For the revelation, at once, had begun, To challenge this world without the sun; My eyes to glower above the horizon, A-gasp the thick brown fog that had arisen, And on forth I had started to flee, As the tremors of thunder roused up their spree, To end the beauty in which was betrayed, With whiplashes of lightning, its purple serenade - That, upon the slightest touch, human skin had flayed, And buried them behind in the ashen memory, Now expressed by remnants of fermented emery, That baked the earth in a dusty brown, For now this land was but a ghost town; Forsaken a peace now left with bland, To rot with dust and turn to sand, No pleasure or mercy to reprimand.
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May 17, 2018
May 17, 2018 at 3:16 PM UTC
Chasing Dreams: The End
Scampering through the wilderness in the ashen lands of which were smog, I stumbled and had startled till day's glistening embers burned out the fog, With little practicality for a promised tomorrow, Its fiery scars to shed nothing but sorrow - And due to all of this unkempt malice, It had embellished a flurry of flames from within its chalice. And at once the world was a dark, cold place, With nothing but a hollowed sun to meet face. And within the facade of a formerly safe path, Followed a new fume of earth's merciless wrath. So, upon a mountain I came to stop, Watching the scanty sun fade to a blue teardrop, Before, at last, it had gone, Retired from earth nearest the split of dawn. And thus blue clouds had crusted the sky, Winds chanting rain with agitated sigh - Until alas offence was taken, and henceforth came their cry, Lashing outwards onto human skin, Frustration to ooze and bubble with sin. Fog had began to smolder the air, As my breaths drew short and started to flare, Yet nothing could be done to reverse this end, Not anyone left could ever seek to mend, For the revelation, at once, had begun, To challenge this world without the sun; My eyes to glower above the horizon, A-gasp the thick brown fog that had arisen, And on forth I had started to flee, As the tremors of thunder roused up their spree, To end the beauty in which was betrayed, With whiplashes of lightning, its purple serenade - That, upon the slightest touch, human skin had flayed, And buried them behind in the ashen memory, Now expressed by remnants of fermented emery, That baked the earth in a dusty brown, For now this land was but a ghost town; Forsaken a peace now left with bland, To rot with dust and turn to sand, No pleasure or mercy to reprimand.
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As I climb The mountain of road On my sleek steal, bony bike I glance back in my mirror... At the rich-reds, Oxy-intensified oranges And burnt-brown trees and leaves Lining the streets that dance; Snow-capped Mount Kosciuszko in the background, Wind whiplashes my wide agape Mouth as I scream: I am alive — Euphoria!
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May 28, 2025
May 28, 2025 at 8:40 PM UTC
Autumn Living