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"undistinctive" poems
this is a portrait of a painter painting  a duck, and as an honest man, i must disclaim i am no painter, no wordsmith, not even a back-alley beautician or smoker drawing letters in the air. i'm a man, a not short nor tall nor distinctive in any other way utterly invisible. however, as an honest man, i need to say you are the sole, indescribable, incredible wonder of this park. you're tall, i think, slim like the long-stemmed brushes you balance between your fingers, and i think i hear you sing as you paint that duck, that undistinctive, ordinary, incredibly lucky duck. i don't think it knows how lucky it is to have your gaze, to be captured, immortalized, in your clever fingers. it quacks off-beat and without thought, and i think, "for shame, duck, bad on you" because even someone as naturally invisible as me knows when to appreciate a spotlight.
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Mar 19, 2014
Mar 19, 2014 at 8:40 PM UTC
portrait of a painter painting a duck
Just an ordinary face like the rest Grey and blurred out like the mist Undistinctive from the rest Majority of the crowd Common and boring to you Unique to me Splendiferous to the eye Beautiful to the heart
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Jan 28, 2016
Jan 28, 2016 at 1:31 PM UTC
Unremarkable